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Parker
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0 posted 2002-01-08 04:50 PM


The Goddess Aurora

Dark gods crawl from forest moss
to fight the fire lord
shadows dance of battles wrought
when camp fires start to roar.

In summers night of far far north
Polaris watches bored
while fire mites, will mesmerize
in trance, above the quiet moors

These sounds that mock, harken not
her footfalls to my ear
and crackling fires, spark desire
for the Goddess to appear

She comes at night in pulsing light
a temptress from the north
on forest spires, with incandescent fires
she dances, to find her Earth'n Lord

On this night an age old rite,
in circles of all Druids before
and Irish men, pure of sin
will dance, to have her sweet reward

In waves of light, she comes tonight
through heavens gateless door
and touches ground, on holy mounds
to dance in ancient Celtic lore

Oh queen of light, behold tonight
this bounty for your choice
choose the one, of sweetest love
and in his dance rejoice

With a roaring chant they began a dance
with thunder through the moors
a thousand men, for a challenge to win
and the hand of the Goddess Aurora.....

To this day they ne'er say
though 'tis a myth, to modern man
they whisper for a chance
and they dance the fire dance

As Aurora descends to the fires of the moors..

James Parker Haley   (c)Apr 27, 2000


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1 posted 2002-01-08 05:03 PM




YAY!!! STANDING OVATION!!! OH MY GOSH, I AM SO HAPPY YOU RE-POSTED THIS GOLDEN TIMELESS CLASSIC, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggsssss) This is sooooooo beautiful, your words take us to sacred spaces and have us dancing with the druids and Celtic winds and lights of the north. What a beautiful ritual of words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! I'm adding this to my library!!! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-08 05:09 PM


Hey Park, very cool.
Dee

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3 posted 2002-01-09 06:17 PM


Ill dance if the Goddess Aurora will appear!
Excellent write!



[This message has been edited by insect (01-09-2002 06:25 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-01-09 06:48 PM


Oh so nice to read, wonderful poem. loved it floria
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5 posted 2002-01-09 06:48 PM


Parker, Thank you so much for reposting this gem as I was not here to see it before.  Great story with wonderful imagery.
Terrific write!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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6 posted 2002-01-09 09:14 PM


This is beautiful. Very vivid imagery.
Sandra

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7 posted 2002-01-09 09:26 PM


Okay, I'm always going to feel a person connection with this one, Park. You know what I mean.

Cor

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8 posted 2002-01-09 09:28 PM


Hi Parker,

How are you, I have missed you and saw your name and had to come and take a look see, of course it was awesome, this is a keeper.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

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9 posted 2002-01-09 09:56 PM


Gothic!   Absolutely lovely and ethereal.

Kathleen--(Kay)
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10 posted 2002-01-09 10:02 PM



Thank goodness for reposts...I get to see the authors' favorites sooner or later...

and find keepers...

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11 posted 2002-01-09 11:00 PM


Noah, thank you very much.

Dee, thanks sweet lass.

insect.... don't know if she likes blondes. lol

floria, thank you very much.

Nancy, well your wellcome... I repost stuff if I can't write..

Sandra, thank you. (smiles)

Corinne, sweet poet...

Cerenity, yes haven't been around much, just a peek here and there. The real world becons all too often. Its nice to see your name again too. (smiles)

Kathleen, thank you very much. (smiles)

Sunshine, yes it is one of my fav's. Thanks

Parker


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12 posted 2002-01-10 01:06 PM


Oh!! This is a really nice poem!!! And you've written this so well... Thank you very much for sharing it!!

The title caught my eye, coz, surprisingly, my ICQ nick is the same! Aurora. I know from Shakespeare's A Midsummer Night's Dream that Aurora is the Goddess of Dawn.

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Florence

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