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Open Poetry #18

When Asked, I Responded

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2002-01-08 03:16 PM

When Asked, I Responded

When asked,
"Could you love a man
Who worships you?"

I said,

“If he allowed me be taken seriously,
Consider that I have value to lend
That I am a bit independent
But would harbor in his safety's bend

Understand no argument is necessary
To win me to his side
Acknowledge I'm a loving giver
To all friends my arms open wide

Allow me to do for him
That which would make me smile,
This, then, my friend,
Is for whom I would go the extra mile....”

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-01-08 03:20 PM

do not go a mile
simply step into my arms
and seal the bargain

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

2 posted 2002-01-08 03:37 PM

Ms Noir - This is quite beautiful. He would be a lucky man indeed who met those criteria and held you.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-01-08 04:01 PM

Soleil Noir - I would not worship, it's not in my heart. But to hold your hand, and give of me, would be my heart... Liked this very much, so true...

BC

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-01-08 04:15 PM

Soleil Noir,
What man could not respond to this. Beautiful! Fair lady.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-08 04:27 PM

(sigh) I know just how you feel, dearest friend, if one worships their lover, one can only love if one is faithful and takes trust seriously and is committed. (big hugggsssss) Sooooooo thought-provoking, sweet friend, I hope this person's questions has been answered with the dignity of true love! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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