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bslicker
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0 posted 2002-01-08 01:52 PM


Magnetic Art

I can imagine a time
when we were in harmony
as deep with wild passion
by making us a pictured silhouette
of an sculptured painted canvas
that lived empty rhythm
through angry smoke
and you appear to me
creating my masterpiece symbols
made from our angel




Bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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1 posted 2002-01-08 01:56 PM


Fantastic Bern..what I liked about this challenge is that it forces you to think differently, and step out of the form of ourselves. Nice Job!
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2 posted 2002-01-08 03:15 PM




(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, don't you just love Karen's beautiful challenge? This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is a true masterpiece of fine art! I love it!!! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bernard, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
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3 posted 2002-01-09 08:21 AM


Great poem bslicker, the words just flowed.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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