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You Did Not Tell Me

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Soleil Noir
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0 posted 01-08-2002 01:43 PM       View Profile for Soleil Noir   Email Soleil Noir   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Soleil Noir


You Did Not Tell Me

You promised me

So many things

Slipped it all on

With a ring

Then in dark of night

Without a sound

All those promises

Came tumbling down
© Copyright 2002 Soleil Noir - All Rights Reserved
Hypnosis
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This is a terribly sad poem here.  I have experienced something like this.  I hope everything rebuilds quickly, though scars will show.  Love is such a terrible thing to joke around with, especially with you, having such a beautiful heart.

    Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Marsha
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Soliel Noir Oh yes I remember this, promises that undergo a change, a rewrite without you getting a chance to check the admendments.

Wonderful writing I really like this one


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



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Deep in the heart


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parapet of dreams
tumbles without foundation
whether day or night

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

rosepetals25
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Soleil Noir,

    I like this. It says so much  with not many words.. I enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

heather_kitn
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You've captured an emotion that many of us have endured so well.  

-heather

I do not seek...I find!
~Picasso~

Ocelot
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So compact yet so full of meaning.  Very good write.  Kudos,

+| ... Ocelot ... |+
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(tears fall down my cheeks) So veey heartwrenching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and pray you will find true love soon that will shield your heart from distrust and betrayal of promise. (big hugggsssss) My heart cries out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! Sad but wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
Seymour Tabin
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Soleil Noir,
Succinct and distinc, Enjoyed
Klassy Lassy
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ohhhh!  broken promises, broken hearts, broken, broken, broken...   

Succinct wording here, but cuts to the quick!  

hugs
~ klassy ~
Martie
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I'm sorry I missed this before Soleil.  It is very deserving of a hug.  
 
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