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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2002-01-08 01:43 PM

You Did Not Tell Me

You promised me

So many things

Slipped it all on

With a ring

Then in dark of night

Without a sound

All those promises

Came tumbling down

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

1 posted 2002-01-08 02:02 PM

This is a terribly sad poem here. I have experienced something like this. I hope everything rebuilds quickly, though scars will show. Love is such a terrible thing to joke around with, especially with you, having such a beautiful heart.

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-01-08 02:02 PM

Soliel Noir Oh yes I remember this, promises that undergo a change, a rewrite without you getting a chance to check the admendments.

Wonderful writing I really like this one

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-01-08 02:18 PM

parapet of dreams
tumbles without foundation
whether day or night

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2002-01-08 02:26 PM

Soleil Noir,

I like this. It says so much with not many words.. I enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

heather_kitn
Member

since 2001-12-07

Posts 61
In The Kokapelli's Song

5 posted 2002-01-08 02:42 PM

You've captured an emotion that many of us have endured so well.

-heather

I do not seek...I find!
~Picasso~

Ocelot
Junior Member

since 2002-01-07

Posts 40
Texas

6 posted 2002-01-08 02:45 PM

So compact yet so full of meaning. Very good write. Kudos,

+| ... Ocelot ... |+

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-08 02:54 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) So veey heartwrenching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and pray you will find true love soon that will shield your heart from distrust and betrayal of promise. (big hugggsssss) My heart cries out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! Sad but wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!