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OWG
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0 posted 01-08-2002 01:31 PM       View Profile for OWG   Email OWG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit OWG's Home Page   View IP for OWG

agua caliente
woman of iron
with rock feet
and stone children

you dance statues
on mojave earth
the sun knows your skin
and fears your cold eyes

you carry dry water
in your earthen bowl
the wind comes to drink
you laugh cactus on glass

long knives bring gold
to your temple
you feed them famine cakes
they chew with empty teeth

the navaho make tattoos
on your belly lands
with rail track lines
you burn their feet bottoms

when they tiptoe to marry your daughters...

OWG 2002 (tribal stuff palm springs...vibes from the raven voices)
© Copyright 2002 OWG - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 01-08-2002 01:38 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

My great great grandfather married
a Native American..Esther Deerfoot was her name..i enjoyed this Owg...and the images as always

               ~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott




Soleil Noir
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2 posted 01-08-2002 01:47 PM       View Profile for Soleil Noir   Email Soleil Noir   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Soleil Noir


This is very, very good.  
Thank you!
OWG
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3 posted 01-08-2002 01:59 PM       View Profile for OWG   Email OWG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit OWG's Home Page   View IP for OWG

vikee...thanks lady...just a little dity for the area here..

Soleil Noir  thanks for the review, pleased that you enjoyed it
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with you


4 posted 01-08-2002 08:25 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

you made me feel the heat.....
Enchantress
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5 posted 01-08-2002 08:46 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Enjoyed this!  Great imagery!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Streen
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6 posted 01-08-2002 08:48 PM       View Profile for Streen   Email Streen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Streen

This creates a very strong theme, I think. I like it a lot. ^_^

-Derek
OWG
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7 posted 01-09-2002 08:13 AM       View Profile for OWG   Email OWG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit OWG's Home Page   View IP for OWG

Sea....thanks lady, for the read and review


Enchantress

thanks for your moments to review...


Streen, thank you for reviewing and commenting
Soleil Noir
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8 posted 06-16-2004 09:15 AM       View Profile for Soleil Noir   Email Soleil Noir   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Soleil Noir

This one is good for a
repost...anytime...
Sunshine
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Soliel and I
know where to find
good stuff

 
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