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inside of seymour's head
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inside of seymour's head |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I need a quick vacation-- comforting as fresh baked bread. a pillow of soft place to land inside of seymour's head. There, the world is magical. Butterflies fly free. There I do not have to fight to find serenity. Gentle, as a whispered wind. A warm hug from a long lost friend. Coffee, steaming in the cold... Within dark cave, a glint of gold. I wish that I could wander here, and view the world through his eyes. It's cozy as a Hobbit's home-- inside of seymour's mind. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I enjoyed this side of you  Kathleen-- |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ YES ! That's a trip I love to take also~ Is he not a travel agent's best package ? Hmmmmm, maybe we're on to something here ... Girlfriend ... I'll just bet we could book reservations~  Loved the lighthearted penning~ *Seymour ... YOU ARE MARVELOUS~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Oh Karen I enjoyed this so very much. It was such a beautiful write, good job! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this is a cutie..and im sure Seymour will enjoy it too..  ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is wonderful!! I love the idea of being somewhere nice and comforting. Sy's head is a great place...and he's an artist too, I'd like to be there amongst his creative thoughts. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, My dearest dear the price is free Just put on your wings and fly with me. We'll build castles of water and sand With magics mind and softness of hand. And watch esprit wash out to sea Gracefully to eternity.  Sy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey seymour...been waiting for you! Thanks to everyone, but especially our dear seymour tabin. I wanted to give you something back, seymour. Your spirit thrives in your words, and always helps me to start the day off with a gentle perspetive. I thank you, sir! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity - I can't get inside Seymour's head. But I would love a cup of that delicious coffee with you... BC |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Seymour weaves his web so sublime I'll read his write anytime |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...what a beautiful tribute to our drearest friend, isn't he just wonderful? Our Seymour always writes such fabulously sublime and surreal masterpieces with descriptive aesthetic feels and sensory! I love this, dearest friend, he will cherish this gift forever! We all love you so much, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful poem, Serenity...I am glad that Sy likes it too! It sounds like its a very comfortable place inside of his head. Great job!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh I do like how you write girl. great job. floria |
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Sunset Member
since 2002-01-08
Posts 80 |
Excellent flow to this! Left me with a smile. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sorry, first flight is reserved I'll stand in awe and then I'll call you and let you know what it's like. Doubt if I could find the wrds, though It's one of a kind, you know A thoroughly enjoyable poem, serenity Thank you Liz |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen, I love this! I'd like to take a trip inside Sy's head as well....lol...may be fun! Glad he enjoyed this one also. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Follow me to where its kind... we'll walk barefoot in Sy-babes mind. Verdant valleys of rhyme scheme dreams Eden's gardens and Shangri-la fed streams. We will see the world thru his wisdom's eyes See the path where his heart's secrets lie. We will walk on his beaches of understand tis there he reaches out ... heart in hand. We will have a tea party by the sea ... Who else wishes to fly with me to Sy's serenity  It will be one RANDY party LOL love ya BOTH ... me twin and me stinky I ask why you come here, you say just because |
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Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169 |
This is a very soothing poem. Thank you for helping relax me a bit tonight. -Streen |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a lovely write! *S* And yes... a wonderful place to visit. *S* A tribute to a great poet/person from one... well done! *S* |
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