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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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And She Breathes ... ~*Marge Tindal*~ In she came, this grand of dame Whispered to me, of her name I am Felicity Dela Marcaesa Will you speak my claim ? She said I've memories to trace yet I must hide in disgrace So if you'll grant me spill of quill I'll tell my story ... yes, I will~ I could only listen in reverent pause as stories with me she shared Caught up in the history of a woman's wrongs now bared~ Far across the ocean in another place and time She came to seek, the will to speak to me through her rhyme~ I have not known a gentle life and thusly it is so, my story will not cause a smile for all the tears that flow~ I loved and was loved by one who was not destined to be mine For circumstance took him from my heart and laid him in the brine~ Came he to me in darkest night when all the world lay sleeping I held him tender in my arms to him willingly surrendered~ He was of blood so royal as to cause blue to seek new hue We loved with a love, surely blessed from above but destined to fall short of our glory~ I could not stand by his side in glaring light of day So I did the next-best thing and with him in the night did lay~ Little was known of our love affair for many and many a fortnight Then there came a chilling wind that took him from my sight~ He wore the crown of Prince and someone else sat his throne I was cast in blasphemous past of a love he once had known~ When in fail-of-health he called out the name he said was mine ... Felicity Dela Marcaesa I've loved you for all of time~ But the scarlet of the letter that fell upon my head was borne in sorrow in my breast for now my love was dead~ No more will I be glowing in the sunset of his love For all the reasons - through all the seasons I'll know I wasn't enough ~ I will return to ask of you that you speak of memories I have laid away before I get too old to tell the stories in my own way~ ~*~ *I'm simply stunned at the revelations from this delicate muse* She found me in a moment of quiet reflection in the meadows of my mind ~I hope I can do justice to the stories she has come to share~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Im glad you and this muse was introduced Marge..loved reading about her..enjoyed Hugs nicely done as always glowing one ha.. ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a way you have of telling such stories! Gold flows from your pen to the page, a treasure for our discovery. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She, and thee will provide Passions with Poetry... looking forward to her taking over your pen for awhile, Margie.... |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
OH how deeply haunting. It grabs me and draws me in. Wonderfully inspiring as well.  s I can't control |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ Thank you ... she tiptoes softly in my ink~ InterLoper~ Thank you, love~ She came to me on cross of wind and blew her story my way ... asking only that I seek to splash some ink on the things she wants to say~ Karilea~ Oh ... she has much to say ... I need to make time to listen~ AngelBear~ Thank you for being drawn to my ink~ I appreciate that you found her thoughts as 'inspiring' as I have~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (01-08-2002 01:52 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a wonderful story...and I can tell that you got caught up in that wonderful place of writing where the words are there before you type them...it's beautiful...enlighten me, to this muse, please?  |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"And she breaths....." She breaths in such beautiful wonderful words which you spelled across this page.... Oh....what a delicate wonderful muse May it tell you all sweet wonderful things that your pen always write Thank you sweet Marge.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Marge! This is wonderful! Please listen for her carefully and quickly pen the words she whispers. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I'm going to figure this out no matter how many replies it takes!!! :-) This story and the words are truly amazing. The gift of giving and telling is one envied by myself and so many others. Keep listening to the words from the wind and writing them down. Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge, this is one of your very best, and being that I love all your poetry, wow, I am just stunned here....I love this I hope there will be more! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, can't wait to hear more of her stories. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You found a new muse then, or rather she did find you I'd love to see the poems she will be stirring up between you two This one really rocked my heart Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ She came from a wooded area and followed me home~ I only know what you see .. so far~ I think she'll be back ... for she seems to have a story to tell~ Thanks gal~ MyEnchantedMelody~ Thank you so much sweet friend~ Echantress~ I will present what she *gifts* to me as she opens up~ She doesn't seem to be in a hurry~ Thank you for the encouragement~ Marti, my friend~ You DID IT ~ Way to go, gal~ Thanks, hon ... it's sooooo good to share with you~ SEA~ That's quite the compliment, lady~ Thank you so much~ VanDana~ Thanks, dearie~ Dee~ Thank you. I can't wait for her to share more with me~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful story, Marge. I enjoyed reading it. |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
With a tear in my eye .... I echo all the above and salute a great poet laureate! Bravo! Love and peace Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge, You certainly did justice to this story. Awesome write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TitiaLove~ We crossed paths in the tick of cyber-time~ Thank you dearest friend~ Yes ... she found me and splashed her ink all around~  SmartChick~ SuzieQ ... I love sharing with you~ FlutterWings~ Dear sweet Maggie ... thank you for such a precious reply~ Love to you and *kisses* for dear Shiloh~ Larry~ Thank you so much~ I sure tried to listen and pen her thoughts~ I appreciate the reply~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Ocelot Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 40Texas |
Ahh, this one is muy bien!! Excelente! Me amor! Good stuff flows out of your pen, that is for sure! Thank you for this one, |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful weave Marge! A tender tale of the truths of love from the eyes of this mysterious new muse ... an excellent story, and a fantastic new addition to your menagerie of muses. I think I will enjoy her, indeed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow miss margie...i would think, that you indeed have done justice... very neat write..much enjoyed.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
She found a talented pen to tell her story... this is beautiful! |
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Ocean Beauty Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 18VT, USA |
This poem is beautiful, the words flowed so wonderfully. I love the story behind it all, its great!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ocelot~ It is such a pleasure for this lady to read your replies~ Thank you very much~ Kit~ *giggles* at the 'menagerie of muses' ... Seems there's a herd of them stampeding my thoughts~ I love ya', gal~ DG~ Thank you VERY much~ SuthernGal~ Well .. 'talented' remains to be seen ... but she sure splashed some nice ink for me~  I love you~ OceanBeauty~ Thank you so much and WELCOME to Passions~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Margie dear, I hope she returns with some more details & you can help us enjoy her tales...waiting...enjoyed this.... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You held me captive with this story as I held my breath to the very end....Absolutely stunning. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--What an amazing muse with a story that is hauntingly romantic. How wonderful that you were open to receive her it with your talented pen. Love it! Love you, sis! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Marge...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amigo~ I am sure she will ... just don't know 'when'~ Thank you, my friend~ StarTime~ Just as she held me in her 'spell of telling'.. I thank you for enjoying it~ Martie~ Thank you for understanding ... 'open to receive'~ Yes ... that's it ... EXACTLY~ JamesMichael~ Thank you so much~ *Hugs* to each of you for welcoming this piece~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I believe you have brought justice to this muse of yours! I'm sure the work you have done here has shown her well! Great piece marge! Hugs Cindi |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marge, awesome story, just awesome! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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