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She's My Sunshine
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She's My Sunshine |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
She's My Sunshine By: Noah Eaton 1/8/01 She's my dream She's my delight Her eyes are emeralds She's my sunshine I would give anything To hold her close She's who I Need the most She's the sparrow of my heart With milk silver wings She's what makes my heart Rejoice and sing She's my silver lining In my sky She's my angel She's my life What must I do? How can I pull through? I need you I need you She's my sunshine I need her love to stay alive Please don't take my sunshine away My heart can't bear to die… She's my Madonna Van Gogh deep inside of me She spans the romance Of all the centuries She's my red rose She smells so sweet She means the heavens To me… I'm all alone When I'm not with her I can't turn away I can't surrender I love her too much But we live so far apart I don't know where I'm going now But for your love I have to travel so far What must I do? How can I pull through? I need you I need you She's my sunshine I need her love to stay alive Please don't take my sunshine away My heart can't bear to die… All this time I sigh and sigh How I can take her hand and make her mine All this time I cry and cry If I can make it alone through another night All this time I try and try To embrace my angel, and into eternity we can fly… What must I do? How can I pull through? I need you I need you She's my sunshine I need her love to stay alive Please don't take my sunshine away My heart can't bear to die… Don't take my sunshine away… [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-08-2002 11:28 AM).] |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Noah, so hauntingly lovely and sad. An emotional love poem that speaks of hope and heartbreak. I enjoyed this very much. Cheryl |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Noah, this is a two tissue box piece. I want to sob for the loneliness and ache in this poem. Very nicely done. I hope the wait is not long. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I believe you are in love  Kathleen-- |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Sometimes love hurts, Noah...but you have turned it into a lovely poem. I hope things get better...remember, when there is love...there is hope. Good luck!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
"She's the sparrow of your heart With milk silver wings" A gentle touch of tiny feet A spread of her wings Causes flutters and tremors Deep within... Your poem is so sad. I hope nobody has to go through that kinda feeling. Imagine a world without sunshine, it is lifeless. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sometimes i think God thinks we are getting a little too much sunshine and moves us into the shade so he can share the sun with others..  hugss...enjoyed Noah dear~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, Sunshine ... |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Oh such a lovely, wonderful statement to the love, and the many hurts, and conflicts that can come with really loving someone. There is also room for growth here. And that is seen in the wonderful expression of your poem. I love it....  I can't control |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
gentle stuff warm hands on the shoulder dug it Noah |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
You will one day take her hand my friend, and I can't wait to see it happen, you will be so joyful. Awesome write Noah, I loved it, was beautifully written. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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