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whiskey
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0 posted 2002-01-08 06:55 AM


Lost inside love
A thought never known
A feeling too hidden
Too hard to explain
Not thinking the way
Eyes too thorned to see
Lost inside Love
Taken from me
Visions of past
Happiness there
No chance to be taken
No glance or shared stare
All was together
Me and you there
Till the day you decided
Our love wasnt fair
Love for you to give
No you to give to
You took you away
And left me so blue
Lost inside love
Longing for you

© Copyright 2002 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-01-08 07:02 AM


Whiskey,
this is a potent song, distilled to perfection
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-01-08 08:45 AM




(sad sigh) So very sad but beautiful read, sweet friend, I too know this feeling of yearning so much too, but in the long run, you will be lost in the beauty of love and true happiness will always fill your heart! (kiss on cheek) We wish you the greatest of happiness, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana
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3 posted 2002-01-08 05:16 PM


enjoyed
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