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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2002-01-08 03:38 AM


You filled my heart! I loved you ardently.
I gave you all, you disregarded me...
How are you feeling now?
I'm your Ophelia.

"Get to a nunnery!"
Was that your order?
There was no room for me
I chose the water.

And to the brook, my love,
I rushed in slippers.
How fast the moon above
Dissolved in ripples!

Your words encouraged me. I did it urgently
And I was purified. I am a virgin now.
Am I appealing now?
I'm your Ophelia.


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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-01-08 08:08 AM


Master,
you wrote a masterpiece.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2002-01-08 10:03 AM


This is a double post here in Open Forum and in Teen Forum. Please contact a Moderator to discuss which poem you would like removed and which one opened. Thank you.
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