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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
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Houston

0 posted 2002-01-08 03:38 AM


I tapped my head.. and shook it 'round,
swear someone called my name.
I looked around the livingroom
trying to find from where it came.

I searched high.. and I searched low..
perhaps I've finally lost my mind.
My mother used to say your nuts
when you hear voices you can't find.

I checked behind the sofa,
and underneath the chair
Standing up with hands on hips,
I know that no one's there.

Suddenly a lightbulb flash..
I know.. its kinda scary.
Lucie had an idea..
Maybe it was Larry..

I opened up the website..
did a quick search just to see.
Sure enough there it was
it was Larry calling me.

Thank you for the heads up pal
I'm glad you didn't leave me.
Thank you Bud for showing me
where all my friends would be.

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.


© Copyright 2002 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2002-01-08 04:14 AM


thanks for the giggle here
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
2 posted 2002-01-08 08:16 AM


Wow! that's some powerful piece of equipment he has...I meant the server.
Very clever write here.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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3 posted 2002-01-08 08:52 AM




YAY!!! (giggles) It's so wonderful how the server and IM can help us stay so close together and always keep us company! (smiles) I love it, sweet friend, this is soooooo cute! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lucie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
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4 posted 2002-01-08 09:34 AM


Funny poem, Lucie.  I can almost see you in your living room, hands on hips, toe tapping impatiently, muttering under your breath, etc.  What were you muttering, you ask?  "Now where did I leave that last bottle of beer?"  lol
Larry C
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5 posted 2002-01-08 10:00 AM


Lucie,
You were starting to worry me. Welcome to #18 babe! So when do the games begin...huh?

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
6 posted 2002-01-08 10:02 AM


*giggling* well, I am sure glad you heard him call your name...we have been missing you. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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