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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-01-08 03:07 AM


“DAY WE MET”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Was walking in the park one day,
caught a glimpse of her face…
Prettier than a picture post card,
most charming, and full of grace…

Then I did something, I can’t believe,
went right over, told her my name…
Walked right up to her, really I did,
took one look at me, like I was insane…

Told her one day we would be like one,
her laughter was pretty loud, hearing it…
Said I probably had fallen on my head,
perhaps I did, even I had to admit…

Well, to make this real long story short,
we did get together, a smile on my face…
Glad I did get crazy, the day we met,
because now we’re together, at her place…
hehehe
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-01-08 04:31 AM


now you know one should not take such chances as those talking to strangers bill didn't your mother tell you any better than that what's wrong with you don't you see the world today and how things are and.....

hehehe, well, as long as you're happy...I'll shut up

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-01-08 05:36 AM


Said I probably had fallen on my head,
perhaps I did, even I had to admit…

reminds me of a story, a restaurant and lots of needed laughter *s

M

HopeS
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3 posted 2002-01-08 06:48 AM


Hey Bill I love stories with happy endings
Hope

Kethry
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4 posted 2002-01-08 07:17 AM


Bill,
looks like you've learned to fall on your feet or your head...whatever works. Nice upbeat poem.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-01-08 08:27 AM




(smiles) Sooooooo cute and lovely, sweet friend, love is a feeling we should never hide and I'm so happy and proud you had the courage to express yourself to her; sometimes it does feel embarrassing but in the end it is such a beautiful afterglow. (big hugggssssss) YAY!!! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may loves joy fill your heart forever! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-08-2002 08:27 AM).]

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2002-01-08 08:38 AM


sounds good to me!

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

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7 posted 2002-01-08 09:46 AM


Bill, Well done!! Yup, sometimes we just gotta take the bull by the horns and what seems a little crazy, is crazy like a fox. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Startime
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8 posted 2002-01-08 09:51 AM


Well done, Bill...sometimes we have to be bold...*grin* I am glad this time it ended up so well for you...so nice to see you happy in her arms. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marsha
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9 posted 2002-01-08 02:29 PM


Bill darling boy this is utterly UTTERLY fabulous. So full of positivity, so upbeat. I hope that YOU are having a fantastic time.

It just goes to show how important it is to sieze the day

This is a keeper for certain. Sometimes we have to be reminded to take our chance right now

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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10 posted 2002-02-20 02:39 PM


enjoy
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