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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Occupied says the sign Someone is in residence Occupied says my heart Preoccupied replies my mind Possessed cries my spirit Obsessed corrects my soul Are we all in agreement? Queries unbelieving id Oh yes, I said To my overcrowded head We all agree It's love Pepper |
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Ocelot Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 40Texas |
So good. I absolutely love the way you made your senses have ideas...Left me with a smile and some good memories. Kudos to you, |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 this is fantastic! and they lived happily ever after..... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may love forever occupy your heart and fill it with possession of joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lavenia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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heather_kitn Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 61In The Kokapelli's Song |
There is such a real and raw feel to this...I love it. -heather I do not seek...I find! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* that is so how it feels...BRAVO!!!Well done. I love it. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
you described it well Pepper ..it has a way of making you feel out to lunch sometimes ha..hugss  ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Peppermint, Well done and clever, enjoyed the read. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love the form here, and you've captured that chaos of thought and emotion of love quite well in this--and I understand internal arguments...lol.. some days I managed to convince myself that obsession is simple focus...grin... applause. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very good, Pepper. You've said much with an economy of words.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I really like this one! It speaks in simplicity and openness. Kathleen-- |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Now turn loose the libido Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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