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Goal Directed
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Goal Directed |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Vertical falls, you don't say how carelessly our thoughts drop away, if lateral thinking were to come our way would we still be deciding impulsively? Would we enjoy those games of hazard knowing that decisions hadn't mattered; and where would the aimless die fall if what's apparent didn't matter at all. When you enter in a house of doors trying the side entrance and then the fore work your way to see other means to beat the system of counting single beans. You'll be seeing a structure less it's beams when thinking with clearer means; if white sheep are to follow and other bovines like to wallow let me stay in my hollow. The die I throw is a banality my life is in constant search for quality must I continue to play randomly, and search for goals haphazardly? |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Oh I like this!! Expanding the mind.. is this something you do always?? I think so!!!  Pepper |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some live life traditionally, some unconventionally, some have a plan, some don't. I say do what works. Nice piece here, got me thinking. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ecrivan, I was goal directed once...it worked well until my head hit the goal post. Thoughtful poem Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
glad to here this gets people thinking! |
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