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Ocelot
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0 posted 2002-01-08 12:10 PM


Ever Long
*~*
Love is like a warm feeling,
Enveloping the soul in a pool of lava,
Melting your heart to another,
Leaving you full of hope,

The days go by,
The moments fall away,
And then, a streak of lightning strikes,
A spark flies,

Undying faith and devotion explodes,
The spark lands,
And the bellowing fire of desire erupts,
The want to see, to feel, to know, to touch,

To touch the life of another,
To breathe them in,
To hear their heart beating next to yours,
To know their entity is for you,

Waking up every morning trying to clear your thoughts,
Unable to clear that one undying thought,
The thought of love, and all its contents,

The thought of your loved one,
Lying there restless, and untouched,
Like a glass sculpture in the heart of man,
You see a vivid picture in your mind,

Never have you seen such a beautiful creature,
Love is blind,
The heart is the center of the universe,
And the soul I s a seed to be planted,

Into the soil of loves garden,
Only to bloom into a forest,
And create a shield,
That may ensure happiness forever,
And keep your soul, mind, and heart warm ever long.

© Copyright 2002 Ocelot - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-08 12:15 PM


*stunning* loves flows out of you like water over a waterfall....with perfection and beauty. Absolutely beautiful. It is very clear that you are in love. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-01-08 02:43 AM


Ocelot~
This is just lovely~
It flows with a growing kind of love~
That's a nice thing to have happen~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2002-01-08 10:10 AM




YAY!!! (smiles) I know just how you feel; I'm in love with the most beautiful girl I could ever dream of, and she has made me feel like the happiest boy I could ever be, and I always call her my Guinevere! (big hugggsssss) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may true love forever fill your heart, soul, mind, and dreams! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ocelot, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-08 10:48 AM


enjoy
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