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The Swing of Things
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The Swing of Things |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I need this... The swing of things Always occupado on the playground’s dull staccato the recess bell just won’t yell no kinder words were spoken to end this hell of reveries never to be broken I need a ride On its seat The faster Speeds away The further I go the lesser I know the central point of beginning of end is hazy is crazy I guess I’m lazy to say I need to sit on the swing of things And ride |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"the central point of beginning of end is hazy is crazy I guess I’m lazy to say I need to sit on the swing of things And ride" the flow of this is perfect Walt  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ 'I need to sit on the swing of things And ride' Welcome to the playground, sweet poet~ I've missed you~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* actually I like to sit on the swing of things sometimes too. This is a great poem that made me smile. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Walty, nice to see you're on the swing of things Missed reading you I have... I really enjoyed this, flowed nicely. Thanks for the smile Maree |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I sure know the feeling. Great write, Walt. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Good to read you again here, Walt. We're all on a ride through this circle right? Kathleen-- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooooo well said, sweet friend, sometimes we just need to take a swing into things but rest under comfort too when necessary! (big hugggssssss) You are always a delight to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wayout, LOL Stop the earth you want to get off. Enjoyed |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I need to sit on the swing of things and ride. How cool is that line. Very cool indeed. write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Walt - So good to read one of yours. Where have you been my friend? Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Walt- Very cool write, my friend. I'm liking this one VERY much. AND...I have to echo Marge...I've missed you too. Glad you're back. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a wonderful analogy Walt! The flow in this is superb, and I love the triple-lined rhymes. Very much enjoyed this indeed ... it's great to read you again! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yes, sir you do!! As long as you are allowed to feel young, you can act young.  |
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