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CondorSey
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Dam-Nation

0 posted 2002-01-07 11:08 PM


I want to pour my heart out to
another or myself, but how to go
about revealing the truth of who I
am and what fills this corporeal shell.
Once I came close, ok, maybe twice but
we don't share the feelings or I try
to backout, push further away, build
another fence.  Good walls make good
neighbors, but bad relationships better.

Let's put the FUN back into Dysfunctional.

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with you
1 posted 2002-01-07 11:18 PM


yes.
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2 posted 2002-01-07 11:18 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautifully said, sweet friend, may we always build walls and invite the loved ones of your life in and block out the demons! (big hugggssssss) So well expressed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Condor, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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3 posted 2002-01-07 11:20 PM


I agree......I too build strong walls. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

heather_kitn
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In The Kokapelli's Song
4 posted 2002-01-07 11:59 PM


The best thing in life will be when you think you are safe behind you walls, only to find that someone has snuck in the back way...someone who loves you and cared enough to find a way to the real "you".  (Just ask me!!  *smiles*)

-heather

I do not seek...I find!
           ~Picasso~

CondorSey
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since 2001-12-24
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Dam-Nation
5 posted 2002-01-08 01:47 PM


Very true Heather.  I remember how wonderful those feelings were.  This poem was written after a not so open relationship.  I understand so many people have experienced what I spoke of in this poem.

Let's put the FUN back into Dysfunctional.

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