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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-01-07 10:57 PM



Day Long Hands

Long and hard
came the reflections
in-between,

The up and down
of the day,

Soft and smooth
should have been
the flow
of loving thoughts ~

But!
Short and swift
were the moments,

interludes of time

~ breathless ~

Left her breathless,
they came too fast,  
left too quick,
myriad thoughts of
pain

Pain hurts

Absent from body
but renders a
mind useless

Never seen
but words touched,
then the heart
broke

Pain hurts

what does
care
look like

feel like?


I would put a
stamp on care
and send it direct,

Bypassing hands

Straight to your heart

If it would
take the
pain
away
from you

If I could

I would…

Long and hard
this day has been
long and hard
and difficult of dream

Distant on the
wind of keen
I heard long the
scream of scoria
~ suffering ~
seeking out the
next victim

I went
to see, to hear,
to hold,
to quietly listen,

All that
I could offer

Was a
helping hand



from Open #12
01.10.01
revised 01.07.02



[This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-07-2002 11:04 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2002-01-07 11:02 PM


Okay, I give up - I'll never grow up and write like you because you just keep growing and growing...

Loved it


jimmy

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2 posted 2002-01-07 11:04 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Karilea, this is so so sad, I too know her tears so well, but with such a loving heart like yours, you will always stamp compassion on hearts messages, and she will always cheer up to you, for you will always be her sunshine, as you are to us all! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, Sharon is a very loving person just as you are, she will cherish this forever and will always be so lucky to have such Sunshine in her heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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with you
3 posted 2002-01-07 11:04 PM


this is so gentle and smiles with friendship very nice
Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-01-07 11:17 PM


Beautiful Karilea...and so nice to dedicate it to Sharon.....

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Startime
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5 posted 2002-01-07 11:23 PM


BRAVO!!!!A perfect dedication....It fits her to a T and I absolutely love it. Very well done. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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6 posted 2002-01-09 10:41 AM


And what could be more welcome than a helping hand?  I missed this one and it slipped by these busy hands, thank you sweet friend of mine.

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-01-09 11:04 AM


Sunshine,
For this a

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