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SEA
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0 posted 2002-01-07 10:47 PM




In her way of thinking
Heart set in inking
Truth in words read unblinking
As stars shine in the twinkling

In her way of thinking
Soul revealed in inking
together they are in syncing
with champagne flutes softly clinking

In her way of thinking
Their duet of rhyme in inking
It’s a matter of sly winking
While two are romantic wine drinking

In her way of thinking
Lovely promise in inking
Bound together in foreverly linking
Blush of bride soft pinking


~SEA~

*for Marge


and they lived happily ever after.....

© Copyright 2002 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-07 10:50 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I love this, I just know Marge will love this beautiful verse your loving heart has written! (kiss on cheek) You are a delight to us all, we all love you so much! This is gorgeous and a true classic in my own way of thinking and feeling! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-07 10:55 PM


Ahhhhhhh!!!!!   Love this Sue!  

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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3 posted 2002-01-07 10:57 PM


You do have a "way of inking" Sea---enjoyed this mucho!

jwesley

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4 posted 2002-01-07 10:58 PM



SEA...she will love it!  I do!  Er, I mean Marge does...or will....

You know what I mean!

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5 posted 2002-01-08 12:01 PM


SEA~

And you said to me, 'with you, I think of magic, anytime I see something so beautiful, I have no words for it, I think, if Marge could see this, she would make magic with her words.'

Then ... YOU wrote the magic of my heart~

How can I thank you ?

How can I thank you ?

I can promise to always look
at things in a magical way~
Pen my heart in pink think of ink
so that foreverly it will stay
delicately stained upon the parchment of your heart
just as this piece will foreverly be etched on mine~


*I love you for this beautifully written piece~

The mention of 'champagne flutes ... set my eyes to misting~

BIG HUGS .... Nah ... bigger than that ... *HUGS*

Hey ... did Karilea steal my line ??
Tee-Hee .... I DO !  I DO !
Or ... at least I WILL .... 'soon'~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2002-01-08 12:04 PM


BRAVO!!!!Have you ever captured her well. Such an excellent poem. I love it!!! I love it!!!**big hugs** Very much in her way of thinking.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (01-08-2002 12:05 AM).]

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7 posted 2002-01-08 12:30 PM


Sea such a heartfelt poem to celebrate her love, and you think ink really well

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

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8 posted 2002-01-08 01:57 AM


So sweet and lovely.. a beautiful song from your "ink" pen

Hugs,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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9 posted 2002-01-09 04:21 AM



SEA-
   This is so beautiful and just perfect for Marge.
   You are so sweet to have written this for her.
   Big hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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10 posted 2002-01-09 06:42 AM


Susan, this is absolutely delightful! What a perfect piece to warm the heart and celebrate Marge's nuptials. I loved the rhyme scheme you followed, very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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11 posted 2002-01-09 10:20 AM


This is beautiful, SEA... as is Marge's way of thinking. *G* Great tribute!
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12 posted 2002-01-09 02:43 PM


Circe darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful

I know Margie girl loves it I read her reply, and YOU are such a sweetie to write this for her. As she is such a sweetie to the whole of Passions.

Absolutely wonderful writing darling girl


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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13 posted 2002-01-09 02:46 PM


Sea this was so so sweet and the picture added to it all. floria
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14 posted 2002-01-09 04:37 PM


Sea how beautiful penned, and so Marge. Thank you for sharing your wonderful heart that shines in your words.

((hugs))
Charisma

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