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Marge Tindal
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Did I Hear

~*Marge Tindal*~

Did I hear, "I love you"
in the still of the night ?
And did I hear it linger
until dawn made first light ?

In wake of the morn
as you spoke my name
I'm sure I heard "I love you"
in gentle refrain~

I heard your voice in whisper-speak
"Come with me into this morn"
Softly spoken in love tones
of soft radiant adorn~

Come and let me hold you
when the sun has lost it's light
'Foreverly' sweet darling
in the twi-of-light~

Keeping the love alive
in shadowing of the dark
As on this flight of loving night
we tenderly embark~

In this full-circle of loving ...
that we have come to know
'Foreverly' I will love you
and always tell you so~


~*Marge and Bill*~
January 2002


*Photo Courtesy - Matt Allgood
Allgood's Little New Orleans Restaurant
Historic Downtown-DeLand, Florida


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com   

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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1 posted 01-07-2002 09:09 PM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

Oh Marge, this is beautiful. Love is a wonderful thing, isn't it?
Marsha
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2 posted 01-07-2002 09:23 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Margie girl darling sister of my soul, I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous.

It is just aglow with love, and you and Bill shine with it. As I've mentioned before darling girl love suits you You wear it very well. And I can see Bill loves you just as much as you deserve to be loved.

Wonderful writing and I love you foreverly too. Shine on Margie moon girl


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Magnus
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3 posted 01-07-2002 09:26 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

OH YESSSS.....beautiful..and your faces
reflect your very words....Thanx Marge
for giving us this...
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 01-07-2002 09:27 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Congratulations Marge on your engagement
I am so happy for both of you
Boy, now are we ever going to hear the love poems! Keep them coming.
Im loved this poem
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 01-07-2002 09:27 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge,
Your happiness makes you glow
Did I forget to tell you so?
Sy
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6 posted 01-07-2002 09:33 PM       View Profile for Flutterwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Flutterwings's Home Page   View IP for Flutterwings

Your love blooms and shows in this fantabulous work of art. Savor every moment of every night and dawn. Love looks good on you.... You make a good looking couple. Stay Happy... Love and peace Maggie ((~.~))

Ivy Rose
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7 posted 01-07-2002 09:33 PM       View Profile for Ivy Rose   Email Ivy Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ivy Rose

Marge and Bill...how rare a gift is a love like yours.  But to be able to write about with such passion and skill is the rarest gift of all.   ***Ivy Rose
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8 posted 01-07-2002 09:35 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Just a lovely picture and congratulations again to you both on your engagement.  You both look so happy and in love.  

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

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9 posted 01-07-2002 09:36 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

you shimmer Marge.....this is lovely
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Somewhere in time~


10 posted 01-07-2002 10:01 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Ahhhh!!! Marge this is awesome!!  Hey, this Bill is one handsome dude too, eh?  You both are just glowing with love....wonderful!
Congrats again to you both and hugs, Nancy.

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 01-07-2002 10:11 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh Marge, your face is just glowing with love and the poem brought this face a smile and tears all at the same time. God love you girlfriend; I am just so happy for you and Bill. Hugs, Marti
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12 posted 01-07-2002 10:12 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Awwww shucks, guys...just awesome that you have so much!!

jwesley
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13 posted 01-07-2002 10:30 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

lovely pic Marge..you look verrry happy..glowing is more like it ha..

               ~Vic
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14 posted 01-07-2002 10:33 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

WOW...you do look so happy....aint it grand??  Hugs to you....


Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

Marge Tindal
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15 posted 01-07-2002 10:42 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

***Friends~
You all are SO kind to me~
Bill and I thank you so very, very much~

That fella you see with me is one sweet, adorable hunk~
Me wuv him very much~
And he knows he's got lots of eyes watching our love grow~

You all are just the bestest there is ~
Thank you all from the 'heart of my little bottom'~

*My friend, Marti, is new to the site ... Tee-Hee ... she forgot who she is, but let's welcome her anyhow~
WELCOME MARTI (new member ID is NewEnglandlazurlu)
... I love you, gal~
Fix that 'Cookie-Jar'

*Love n' hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com   

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16 posted 01-07-2002 10:49 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Did I hear, "I love you"
in the still of the night ?
And did I hear it linger
until dawn made first light ?

In wake of the morn
as you spoke my name
I'm sure I heard "I love you"
in gentle refrain~
====================================

Margie girl..this is a loveswept moment of inspire and a lovely poem...
and its a IWIHWT too!!
you and your "foreverly" muse make for magic poetry...
we love ya in love girlie

Yes I've changed ...
so why couldnt you given all we've been thru,
could I still blow your mind ... leave you breathless.

~TS~

Bec
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17 posted 01-07-2002 11:22 PM       View Profile for Bec   Email Bec   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bec

Marge...

I'm so glad you and Bill are happy, and it shines through in all you say! Congratulations, not only on your engagement, but on all the wonderful things you've been writing to share with us (and to email to me!! )

Bec

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
-Winnie-the-Pooh

Startime
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18 posted 01-07-2002 11:29 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

Oh Marge your eyes sparkle with the light of love.....*sigh* I just love the fact you are in love and to such a great looking man too...good job, girl...hold him tight and fill his life with all the passion your heart has. Congradulations to you both....Keep writing about it because I love to read of your joy and happiness. **big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

HopeS
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19 posted 01-08-2002 02:09 AM       View Profile for HopeS   Email HopeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HopeS's Home Page   View IP for HopeS

Hey Marge are you listening
The picture and words  
were from two hearts  glistening
Congrats my friend
Hope
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20 posted 01-08-2002 02:14 AM       View Profile for peppermint35   Email peppermint35   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for peppermint35

Oh I see.. you outshine the moon

Lovely poetry.. and so r u

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

Ocelot
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21 posted 01-08-2002 02:18 AM       View Profile for Ocelot   Email Ocelot   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ocelot

This one is so wonderful.  I feel so good right now and it is all because of your poem.  Thank you,  Kudos!

+| ... Ocelot ... |+
Bill Charles
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22 posted 01-08-2002 05:55 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Marge - the poem and the photo is fabulous. Congratulations to you and he...

BC
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23 posted 01-08-2002 07:15 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

oh margie..how good love looks on you...
amazing isnt it..how big such small words can be..oh how they can take the breath away...

keep loving...
hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and even when we're apart, you beat around in my heart..."  -lonestar

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24 posted 01-08-2002 07:23 AM       View Profile for BloomingRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BloomingRose

Beautiful Marge, and your face reflects the love completely!

*Big Hugs*
Deb
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