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Our Love Entwines
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Our Love Entwines |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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If only a second were allowed of me. I would turn that second into a lifetime. For within that moment, with you I live. Within that flash, my heart absorbs you. Does a heart have to feel love to know it? Does a kiss have to be real to taste wine? Will a touch become the passionate caress? Or...must it all become just love's dream? Across the void of my dreams I find you. Your scent stirs me even as I lie asleep. I feel your warmth beside, flow over me. I...my dearest, wish to not yet awake. Love, I cherish this single tick of time. I shall live till aged within this moment. For this ragged heart and mind keep you. In dreams our love entwines, becomes one. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the magic of love is so heavenly it also fills our dreams and reveals us to its essence there! (big hugggssssss) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may your dreas forever come true with love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this is what beauty is. If anyone were to hve asked me before this I'd have said Beauty is ethereal you can't capture it in words Now it has been done I'd just recite this and everyone would acknowledge this as the definition of beauty What can I say except this is utterly wonderful. It's a keeper for certain   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*Northern Sigh Alert!!* Great write Barry! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, you are the resident romantic "If only a second were allowed of me. I would turn that second into a lifetime. For within that moment, with you I live. Within that flash, my heart absorbs you." major sighs....wish my hubby would say something like this to me....wow.....  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh,Magnus~ 'If only a second were allowed of me. I would turn that second into a lifetime. For within that moment, with you I live. Within that flash, my heart absorbs you.' YES ! I now have known that moment~ I think you've just written my little heartsong~:hert: This is stunningly beautiful~ It whispers love~ ... true love~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx again Noah...your words are sincere and enjoyed.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, you are a trip...and toooo kind.. thanx... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh boy Nancy, here we go again with the sigh alert...cute...thanx... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Seymour, thanx Sy...always appreciate your comment... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh boy Sue...I feel honored.... Maybe he needs to read some poetry??? I am sure he feels these words... After all, I wasn't always this way, didn't always write like this... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh Marge...you are gonna make me blush... Thanx...You do pretty well yourself... Much enjoy your poetry.. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah Magnus, you've raised the bar again and given us a higher level to attain...very well done my friend. jwesley |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh...more *sighs* from north of the border...you will have us melting all the ice up here, my friend. I love it....so so romantic. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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