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Ocelot Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 40Texas |
The sweet smell of perfume, The everlasting bliss of purity, An undying devotion to you, I am in Love. Follow your soul around the world, Follow you heart to the moon, A path unknown, and exciting, I am in Love. You are beautiful, You are absolutely beautiful, You are what I’ve been searching for, I am in Love. I am in love with who you are, I am in love with your heart, I am in love with the things you do, I am in love with you, I Love You.
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Ladyhawke Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 86 |
Direct, heartfelt, and straight to the point-and heart, as well. Well done. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! STANDING OVATION!!! YAY, OH MY GOSH, WE'RE ALL SOOOOOOO HAPPY FOR YOU, THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!! (big hugggssssss) We're all so happy for your love found and happiness, sweet friend! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ocelot, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Ocelot, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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HumbleBee Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 52Kentucky |
I love your poem, I felt your happiness and I'm smiling and thinking...ain't love grand? I believe emotions of love and loss to be our greatest inspiration when trying to write poetry. I am very happy this poem was inspired by love's emotions...a great poem. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
This is the time of year where love is in the air, and vey contagious, but here it seems to be more than love, you have a very special person on your hands. I am happpy to see it! Great job on your first post, and I welcome you here! Can't wait to read more from you!!! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Very Nice First Post! I shall be looking forward to more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Welcome to Passions....you have introduced yourself perfectly. This wonderful poem of love is filled with joyful feelings that I felt strongly as I read it. Those feelings made me smile. BRAVO!!! Magnificent. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions. What a hopeful, expressive poem. Kathleen-- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions! No doubt about the theme or emotions in this poem. Well done, Ocelot! (And nice name  ) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ocelot, welcome to Passions! I can see that you will probably enjoy it around here. Please check your e-mail for a special greeting! Karilea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful expression of your feelings...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this is a moment frozen in time. . . well done. . . welcome, please take a look around. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ocelot~ OH ... there is no doubt that I love this poem~ To see my own heart-thoughts emblazoned on the screen ... seems a mirrored reflection to all I feel~ Thank you so much for sharing~ Welcome to Passions~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
welcome!!!! love is such a beautiful feeling. I hope it stays with you for a long time. RP |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ocelot- This is wonderful! Such beautiful expressions of love you've penned here...very well written. Welcome to Passions! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (01-09-2002 03:49 AM).] |
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