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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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0 posted 2002-01-07 06:05 PM


This night is made for romance
So much love is in the air
My gaze moves in your direction
As I catch sight of your amorous stare

Your eyes they see right through me
There is no need for us to speak
My love for you can only be measured
By the highest mountain peak

The most vivid colors of the rainbow
Are so very symbolic of you
With you I fly above the crowd
And look down to admire the view

To you I so easily surrender
As I lose myself in your eyes
We'll scale new heights of passion
As each day holds a new surprise

With you right here beside me
My feet rarely touch the ground
How very blessed am I
For this special love I've found

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
strbbux
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1 posted 2002-01-07 06:06 PM


The poem was so wonderful. the last verse great. floria
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2 posted 2002-01-07 06:29 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...I love this, isn't it so magical how love can sweep you off your feet and send you heaven-bound? )kiss on cheek) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you are a true Queen of Romantic Verse. I LOVE IT!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
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3 posted 2002-01-08 02:29 AM


::sigh:: quite lost in the romantic imagery...

You wrote it so well..

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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4 posted 2002-01-09 04:17 AM



Suetang-
   Beautifully said, my friend.
   I enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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