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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-01-07 06:00 PM


Images of love are very evident
In the myriad of words I weave
My feelings are all laid out
As I wear my heart upon my sleeve

I'm such a hopeless romantic
This is a fact I can't deny
As I paint a picture of lovers
Underneath a moonlit sky

The moon is like a beacon
Casting beams across the sand
As this pair of star-crossed lovers
Walk together hand in hand

The soothing sound of the waves
Is the only thing that can be heard
Warm feelings of love and yearning
From these two souls are now stirred

They lie and face each other
Bodies entwined in a passionate embrace
As around each others faces
Their fingers lightly trace

Lips now joined in anticipation
As sweet loving has now begun
Within each others arms they'll be
With the rising of the sun

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
strbbux
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1 posted 2002-01-07 06:11 PM


A romantic you are suetang and this is wonderful. floria
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2 posted 2002-01-07 06:13 PM




YAY!!! (smiles) Yes you are a hopless romantic, and you always share the heaven of love in your heavenly verse! (kiss on cheek) May you forever be star-crossed in destiny and see the rising of the sun everyday through loves eyes! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-07-2002 06:13 PM).]

thepoeticplumber
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3 posted 2002-01-08 08:33 PM


Such romanticism in the words of this poem Sue.  It is always such a pleasure to read your love words.  And I think being a hopeless romantic is wonderful.  Your oh so good friend.  Roger


JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-01-08 08:50 PM


Sounds like fun...James
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5 posted 2002-01-08 09:36 PM


Wow Sue....nice write...you have definitely
hit the door of romance with this one..

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6 posted 2002-01-08 09:42 PM


Wonderfully romantic Sue!
Enjoyed so much.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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7 posted 2002-01-08 09:45 PM


Sue, this is a perfect sceario. I want to place myself directly in it! Enjoyed lots.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-01-09 09:37 AM


Suetang,
Beautiful imagery and had me wishing I was him. There was a him, correct? Very soothing.
I like the finger trace about the face.

Roger

Suetang
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9 posted 2002-01-09 04:29 PM


Thank you all for your beautiful words.

True Reflections, yes it was a "him" I was writing about.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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10 posted 2002-01-10 10:57 PM


I love seeing love through your eyes, you are getting so good at these mushy ones Sue

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

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