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Keith Morgan
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0 posted 2002-01-07 03:18 PM


Another Place, Another Time

From the moment I first saw you
I knew we were meant to be
For as you walked away
A sparkling copper penny stood your place
As I touched the penny
My soul entered another realm
A waking dream had come upon me
An instantaneous drifting
Into your world
I now see you across the distant lake
Dressed in the nighttime air
My piercing glare gently nudges your heart
Making you aware of my presence
As our eyes make contact
The lake creates a misty bridge
That leads me to where you stand
My feet float as if made of wings
In a rush to embrace your outstretched arms
But the hands of fate are cruel indeed
And dreams are just that
As you fade into the darkness
Leaving me alone under the stars
With my unfulfilled wish
A cooper penny
And the quiet whispers of time

Marcel


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1 posted 2002-01-07 03:20 PM



Somewhere in Time...and is this movie your inspiration?  If not...it would have been....

very good, Marcel...thank you!

rosepetals25
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2 posted 2002-01-07 03:49 PM


Keith,

     Awww... Just lovely


Hugs,
Tara

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3 posted 2002-01-07 03:51 PM


The lake creates a misty bridge
That leads me to where you stand


a romantic image you created in my mind..enjoyed very much Keith

             ~Victoria~

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4 posted 2002-01-07 03:59 PM


Keith very romantic and yes...much like Somewhere In time.....hugs.

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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5 posted 2002-01-07 07:59 PM


Keith, this is a beautiful, romantic poem. Thank you for sharing it.
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