. . . hold me in thy heart . . . Senryu string

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Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-01-07 02:37 PM

goodnight my lovely
let thine eyes close in slumber
dream of our sweet love
~*~
let our dreams play out
they shall meet in the heavens
and come together
~*~
synergistic love
whispered moan falls from my lips
uncontained longing
~*~
hold me closely dear
hear my whisper from afar
hold me in thy heart

Inspired by:Goodnight

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (01-07-2002 05:03 PM).]

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2002-01-07 02:52 PM

you excel at this form..beautifully written interloper..

~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

N orth Carolina Girl
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

2 posted 2002-01-07 02:58 PM

Interloper,I envy people who can write such romantic poems.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

3 posted 2002-01-07 03:07 PM

with arms that cradle
holding me close in slumber
you are my sweet dreams

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-01-07 03:14 PM

I think I'll throw you in a bag with Marsha...this is sweetly mushy...and a Keeper....

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2002-01-07 03:16 PM

Victoria ~
Thanx. I've been told I am exceedingly _____ (you fill in the blank), but to say I excell in poetry is a most high compliment

North Carolina Girl ~
I try to write most of my piece in a very romantic and/or sensual vein. Thanks for the read and taking time for my work

SEA ~
my sweetest of dreams
cradles my head lovingly
sweetening my dreams

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-01-07 03:17 PM

Sunshine ~
You snuck in there and I almost missed you. Hooray for you AND Marsha

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-01-07 03:32 PM

Wonderfully done Interloper! I've come to expect excellence whenever I see your name come up....and it is exactly what I get! Hugs, Nancy.

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

rosepetals25

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8 posted 2002-01-07 03:36 PM

Interloper,

*sighs* What can I say? You do these soooooo well.. I love them

This is going into my library.. muchly enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

9 posted 2002-01-07 03:59 PM

Wonderful Interloper...just wonderful. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

10 posted 2002-01-07 05:12 PM

*sigh* you do it to me every time...I cannot help but read the sensual romance of your poetry and *sigh* **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-01-07 05:16 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, these are soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your loving words always make us all swoon in the softness and romance your heart creates! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true classic! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2002-01-07 05:22 PM

Enchantress ~
You can stop saying that, Nancy ... I'll give you 100 years to stop

Tara ~
The Tall Texan melts into his boots once again...

Nightshade ~
Your light is shining brightly and i am enjoying the glow

Startime ~
Now I am melting out of the seams of my boots into the dust of the corral

Noah ~
Make sure your girlfriend is around if you're going to swoon. It is nicer thataway, i promise!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

strbbux
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Posts 3859

13 posted 2002-01-07 06:23 PM

Oh ( sigh ) sososo sweet. floria

Hypnosis
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14 posted 2002-01-07 06:30 PM

SOO sweet there Interloper. This was so beautifully written, great job! This was a pleasure to read.

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Ocelot
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since 2002-01-07

Posts 40
Texas

15 posted 2002-01-07 06:34 PM

Very very nice...leaves me in a sweet and settled mood. Your poetry is always pleasurable. Kudos to you.

+| ... Ocelot ... |+

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

16 posted 2002-01-07 06:36 PM

This is exquisite senryu...So beautifully worded and radiating the purest embers of a heart aflame with love. ***Ivy Rose

vandana

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17 posted 2002-01-07 07:01 PM

liked it

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

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Pennsylvania

18 posted 2002-01-07 07:20 PM

These are lovely
Soft and sensual
In flowing phrases
LIz

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

19 posted 2002-01-08 10:45 PM

Hi there. I always enjoy your poems, this part really works for me.
"synergistic love
whispered moan falls from my lips
uncontained longing"
Sigh, and sigh again...
Sandra

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