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bslicker
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0 posted 2002-01-07 10:28 AM



The Gift

Restful in your long robe
Laying there all cuddling
Upon the couch of pastel colors
Such a beautiful gift you are.


bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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1 posted 2002-01-07 11:22 AM


Very sweet tribute to someone special. It should please them immensely. Cheryl
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2 posted 2002-01-07 11:25 AM


Nice poem!  I think your love will love this!  Short and very sweet, my friend!  You have a beautiful heart.

    Randy Meador

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3 posted 2002-01-07 01:26 PM


bslicker - ah yes, to someone special, a gift...

BC

jwesley
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4 posted 2002-01-07 01:28 PM


Yep, yep...says it all...

jwesley

angelbear
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5 posted 2002-01-07 01:31 PM


sweet and so descriptive... very nice

I can't control
my destiny
I trust my soul,
my only goal
is just to "be"
-Lyrics from RENT

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6 posted 2002-01-07 04:38 PM


*big smiles*  Love this!  short but VERY sweet!
Cindi

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7 posted 2002-01-07 05:39 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you always write love so beautifully in your words! (smiles) May she forever offer your heart a gift of true eternal love! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bernard, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-01-07 05:43 PM


*sigh* this poem is truly a gift to someone you love. Very well done. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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