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Transcendental Time
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Transcendental Time |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Transcendental Time My butterfly still sheds a tear And never will it disappear. It is adorn a symbol born To mourn a heart that has been torn It came in flight in passions light A poet passing in the night That sewed to her some wings of blue And smothered her in colors hue. And now she cries to stay a goal To hold him safe within her soul And searches with the aid of rhyme To touch once more this poets time She comes to rest all poets flower To sip the nectar of their power To drink in transcendental rhyme To touch once more now ghostly time But he is there and I am here And if I could I’d dry her tear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It is adorn a symbol born To mourn a heart that has been torn It came in flight in passions light A poet passing in the night That sewed to her some wings of blue And smothered her in colors hue. And now she cries to stay a goal To hold him safe within her soul And searches with the aid of rhyme To touch once more this poets time ============================================= oh Sy ... my precious, dear sweet, Sy ...  do you know how deeply this touches me ... this is so beautiful. you've turned my world (and library) in to Eden and filled it with butterflies with all your poetic bouquets ... each one is treasured, as are you. Thank you always seems too little to say for your kind intend and gifts of poetry. As for that closing couplet ... dont ever doubt that you do ... thank you for that too my Stinkylove.   *ww* me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Finally...a cup of coffee and my morning seymour too! And I see Jan! I take it all as a good omen! And methinks that you have dried more than a few butterfly tears!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah...what JM said.... |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour, you have such tenderness here.....I love this  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Serenity, Thank you *L* Sunshine, Sea, Thank you *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*library*  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderfully written Seymour... jwesley |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seymore this is beautiful. and the flow and meter of it. Perfect. floria |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour this is truly utterly beautiful Normally your writing is wonderful this is even better than normal. Fantastic You know that this is utterly wonderful don’t you, the flow and the metre are just perfect    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, I know you have dried JM's tears more than once or twice. A lovely write at a perfect time! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You are a poet's poet, Sy... This was so very romantic. It came in flight in passions light A poet passing in the night That sewed to her some wings of blue And smothered her in colors hue I loved these words. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sey, you never disappoint. Corinne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jm, My I you Jweskey, Thank you so much. Floria, Thanks for the read and wonderful comment. Marsha, Flattery will get you everywhere. *L* Nancy, Hugs and kisses back. *L* Madame C, You picked the best. *L* Corinne, Nor do you. *L* [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (01-07-2002 09:16 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your lovely words are always so enchanting and spellbinding! (big hugggssssss) This vision transcends beauty so wonderfully, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you Noah for the read and wonderful comment. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy...don't ever let anyone think you are not a talented poet...They would be lying.. And very jealous... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, As a good poet yourself I take that as a compliment. Thank you Sy |
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