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2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

0 posted 2002-01-07 07:51 AM

My Beloved,

Being apart from you certainly isn’t easy
My heart still aches and my stomach is queasy
I find myself missing you in so many ways
And gentle thoughts of you fill my days
I think of all our time that we were together
and of our life and our toils that we weathered
It seems like just yesterday I saw your smiling face
Your joyous laughter’s gone. Our home’s an empty place
I feel that the world has stopped turning
To be with you is what my soul is yearning
So sweetly, we touched each other’s lives
Death is between us now. I’m filled with sighs

I can hardly go on with this pain.
I’ll eagerly wait until we are one again.

Until then,
All my love….

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-01-07 08:00 AM

Melton,
lovely write.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2002-01-07 08:29 AM

This is so true. It never is easy to be apart from the one you love.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-01-07 08:58 AM

Beautifully sad. This is the hardest love letter to read. (Into my library)

Hypnosis
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since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

4 posted 2002-01-07 11:41 AM

Yes, to be apart from a love even for a couple of days is hard, but in this case the pain must be immeasureable. I hope you love comes back to you soon.

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

5 posted 2002-01-08 07:15 AM

Thank you all for commenting. This scenario hasn't happened, yet. But, I would feel this way if I did lose my beloved.

Thanks again
Melton

Mon Cherie

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since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

6 posted 2002-01-08 12:49 PM

Aw... Melton, this is so sweet!! Well done!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2002-01-09 07:20 AM

Such a sorrowful piece Melton, yet captures the depth of love and devotion you clearly hold dear to your heart. Beautiful emotion, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sunset
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since 2002-01-08

Posts 80

8 posted 2002-01-09 07:44 AM

Tugs at the heartstrings. Powerful ending.

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

9 posted 2002-01-09 08:07 AM

Florence, Kit, Sunset,
Thanks for reading. We often speak on this subject so that we can cope with the inevitable- A letter I hope to avoid for many years.
Thanks again

Melton

[This message has been edited by 2dalimit (01-09-2002 08:08 AM).]

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