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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-01-07 03:37 AM


Off to land of lullabye--
panorama behind eyes...
every muscle now reposed
day rewinding--dreams behold.
Oh would this were a world to share.
My place of dreams--to find you there.


*goodnight*

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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2002-01-07 04:15 AM


serenity - hope you don't mind my verse to yours...

Off to land of lullabye--
panorama behind eyes...
every muscle now reposed
day rewinding--dreams behold.
Oh would this were a world to share.
My place of dreams--to find you there.

A lullaby you shall have,
my eyes reflect my thoughts
of that haunting moon,
day ending, night falls,
eyes to close, dreams to share,
softly sleep, I’ll be there...

BC


Kethry
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2 posted 2002-01-07 05:10 AM


Oh my, such lovely verse from the sleepless ones. I'm so glad this hour of the morning has captured your muse. The writing is magical!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



catalinamoon
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3 posted 2002-01-07 07:02 AM


Wish I was on my way to sleep, instead of up since 5  LOL
Peaceful write,though.
Sleep well.
Sandra

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2002-01-07 01:34 PM


moths dont sleep baby  

Yes I've changed ...
so why couldnt you after all we've been thru,
could I blow your mind ... leave you breathless.

~TS~

jwesley
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5 posted 2002-01-07 01:41 PM


Awww, just close your eyes my friend - there, that smile of mine is for you.

jwesley

strbbux
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6 posted 2002-01-07 01:46 PM


Serenity, how you make your words just flow. beautiful floria
Jamie
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Blue Heaven
7 posted 2002-01-07 02:06 PM


how many hours after going to bed does this take you?...lol-
nice thought anyway-- and a nice poem

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

His Poet
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8 posted 2002-01-07 02:08 PM


Such a nice feel to this. Soothing to read. Cheryl
Victoria
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9 posted 2002-01-07 08:33 PM


i think you just sang me to sleep..   ha..nicely done

              ~Vic

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2002-01-07 08:48 PM


Now I'm sleepy and it's too early for bed!
Lovely...well done Karen!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2002-01-07 09:33 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your soothing soft words make me feel like napping too and dreaming away happily! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much and wish you the sweetest dreams! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2002-01-07 09:44 PM


Serenity,
One never knows does one? *L*

Fallon
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13 posted 2002-01-07 10:15 PM


goodnight!


serenity blaze
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14 posted 2002-01-07 10:18 PM


wanted to say thanks , but I really WAS just tucking myself into bed...sleeptime tea and poetry....yawning...(just trying to fool myself into believing it)

Thanks again, hugs forum!

(serenity exits, wearing fuzzy slippers...)

Hypnosis
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15 posted 2002-01-07 10:23 PM


Sleep is my most favorite time of the day, where I am finally relaxed and regrouping.  Good night there Karen!

   Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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