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Sven
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0 posted 2002-01-06 10:35 PM


aesthetic beer
       thin surreal
            scream absurd
paint an investigated passion
                             she to him
                her fashion metaphor
     is electric green
performing every purple silhouette
         as if a masterpiece knows how

appear angry
       model nude
     feel with music never black
and enter the museum of time
where canvases
       hang next to sculptures
      in delighted air
walk around squarely
     and remember
that the tour
           is always free

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2002 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-06 10:40 PM


Uniquely you...I am finding this fascinating.

Another wonderful magnetic poem from another poet of magnetism! Bravo, Sir Sven!!!

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2 posted 2002-01-06 10:47 PM


This was meant to be read/heard aloud.  Wow, Sven...most impressive.  And very enjoyable, too.
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3 posted 2002-01-07 12:27 PM




YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! A gallery of words and impressionism to marvel upon from your loving heart! This is magnificent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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4 posted 2002-01-07 02:59 AM


Sven - only you could write like this my friend... Just fantabulous...

BC

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5 posted 2002-01-07 05:47 AM


Sven,
I was strangely attracted to this piece...and I wasn't disappointed.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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6 posted 2002-01-07 07:04 AM


Very cool, Sir Sven.
Sandra

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7 posted 2002-01-07 02:49 PM


Oh GR8 Voice of the Northlands, regale us more with your offerings as they are too few and far between

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8 posted 2002-01-07 02:52 PM


Hey I like this, tell me please just what is magnetic poetry....? Too cool~!


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9 posted 2002-01-07 03:00 PM


I havent wrote one of these magnetic poems in a while..you did very well sven
Hope your holidays were happy.

                 ~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


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10 posted 2002-01-07 06:26 PM


Soooooooo nice, floria
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11 posted 2002-01-07 11:38 PM


lovely words here, I may have to try this challenge....though...LOL great one Sven!...

Lauren~

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12 posted 2002-01-07 11:44 PM


WOW!!! I read this aloud and loved it....Stunning, Sven, as only you can make it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sven
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13 posted 2002-01-07 11:48 PM


thanks everyone. . . this challenge was fun to do. . . I may have to do it again. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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14 posted 2002-01-07 11:51 PM


Incredible writing Sven...
I gotta tell ya sweetie like our friend Duncan has said above when I read this poem aloud it was totally awesome...
I verrry bearrry much enjoyed this read...
Hugs2uDearPoetFriendSven
*~coco~*

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15 posted 2002-01-08 05:29 PM


my friend,you always write soo good
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16 posted 2002-01-08 07:32 PM


I'm not familiar with this type of poetry, but I do like the individuality of it.  My compliments.
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17 posted 2002-01-08 08:56 PM


Great write by a very magnetic poet!
Love it!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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18 posted 2002-01-08 08:59 PM


It is very fascinating in its entirety. Thank you for the write.

-Streen

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19 posted 2002-01-09 12:26 PM


This is wonderful, John, so many colorful images here, and I have
been thinking about taking up painting.

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

Sven
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20 posted 2002-01-10 12:02 PM


again, thanks to everyone that's replied. . . you're all great. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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21 posted 2002-01-10 12:29 PM


Hi Sven,

Came looking and so glad I did, wonderful work here, how are you and hope the holidays were great.

Love, Cerenity

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22 posted 2002-01-10 12:32 PM


I loved it! everything about it,
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23 posted 2002-01-10 04:21 AM


I HAVE MISSED YOUR WITTY INVENTIONS OF PURE POETIC PLEASURE, MY FRIEND...HOW ARE YOU? AN EXQUISITE TREAT FOR ME, THIS EVENING..THANKS, KOKO

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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24 posted 2002-01-10 07:18 AM


Sven Pen! This is very alluring. 5 stars...and then some. Art through your eyes is very divine. So glad I came across this piece! Bravo!!

Sincerely,
Regina

Sven
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25 posted 2002-01-10 11:35 PM


thank you everyone. . .   it's nice to see you all again. . . welcome back. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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26 posted 2002-01-29 06:52 PM


Well, you've done it again. How did I miss this one?

This one was excellent! I've played around with magnetic poetry, but I don't think I can do what you have done here with it. Still have that whole infatuation with green, I see...I think this is the way you use it here has been the best so far, Sweet Sir! Did you write this with your gallery poems in mind? I'm almost sure you did.

Yep. Good thing I did a search because I was missing your poetry. I've found another treasure for my library.



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27 posted 2002-01-29 08:23 PM



We don't call you the SVEN PEN for nothin', yanno?!   This is way cool...I used to do magentic poetry a few years ago, it would often spark my muse. And, it certainly made yours twinkle!  Excellent, m'friend.

It's good to see you posting again

keep in touch~
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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28 posted 2002-04-05 04:52 PM


Well, I'm looking through my library finding my favorites. WOW! This one has two pages worth of replies. Its no surprise to me though. After all, it IS your work.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

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29 posted 2002-04-05 04:56 PM


Hmm..if I have you in my library, then why aren't you still on my shelves? Geesh...
adding...

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

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