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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2002-01-06 09:45 PM



One Petal

Rest easy, the pain is mine
Before you walked away I was fine
There is time to heal my soul
But I'll need to stand not fall

The tears I'll wipe with one rose petal
A simple petal from the reddest rose of all
Roses were meant for happiness and sadness
And when the chill of the night brings no caress

I will put that one petal near your portray
And if by chance you can sense my dismay
You'll find me the same person you left torn apart
My arms will always greet you with my open heart

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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1 posted 2002-01-06 09:50 PM


*sigh* my heart goes out to you that you feel such pain. I know this kind of pain only too well...I hope that time will heal it for you. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-01-06 09:56 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Daniel, this is so so sad, my heart goes out to you and I pray with all my heart your heart will heal and you will be showered in rosepetals of true love and happiness by a loving trusting heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, our hearts go out to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-01-06 10:05 PM


Daniel....THIS is beautiful!!

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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4 posted 2002-01-06 10:44 PM


oh daniel, my heart goes out to you if this is from personal experience. Love can really hurt in the end, but time shall heal your heart. You will love again and find the perfect lady for you.

RP

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5 posted 2002-01-07 05:23 PM


my soul weeps along with y ou.

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

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