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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-01-06 09:22 PM





Debts to pay
as you lay funds away;
the more you crave
the less you save
with loans over due
and your feeling blue,
the pot's on to brew
it's your stew.
peel the pods first
before expenses burst
keep the broth pure
and finances will be more secure.
If you boil the veggies fresh
you'll be out of unwanted mesh
when adding more salt
those payments will halt.
yes, maintain a low simmer
your future now glimmers
cool the soup down
you'll be out on the town.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-06-2002 10:09 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-06 09:26 PM




(sigh) Sooooooo powerfully expressed, sweet friend, many things have a cost but some debts can be paid in full if we keep awareness in mind. (big hugggssssss) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-06 09:44 PM


LOL!  Kudos!  Nicely done, I think I'll try your recipe myself.... now how does that go... order chinese first?  Hmmmmmm......


ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-01-06 09:50 PM


All I know is that Madame Chip loves cooking poems, this is a repost too but it tastes good lol!


Mac Attack
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4 posted 2002-01-06 10:11 PM


Old or new,
I like it too!

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-01-07 09:10 PM


Thanks for posting this one, Martin...It leaves me with a taste for material goods, but it sounds like such a good recipe that I will try it anyway.
thanks for the recipe for a great stew
I bet it tastes good with an ice cold brew

Delicious!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 2002-01-07 09:29 PM


Martin darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful. I don't care if it's old or new, I'm glad Lyra persuaded you to repost it.

This is one of the best recipies ever, perfect for keping out of trouble

Really well written and a really great piece from you

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


ecrivan
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7 posted 2002-01-08 12:19 PM


If only I had the pateience to cook as well as I can pen this recipe, lol


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