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Fallen Darkness: Mushy's Challenge
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Fallen Darkness: Mushy's Challenge |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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*ok this is my first time doing a challenge, I tried!* Until the stars grow dark and there is no more day My love for you remains after the sunlight fades Without you I am not complete My love for you stays strong through snow and sleet When the air catches fire and the seas dry to dust I'll reminisce on how we found love from lust And I will be forever grateful to have had your trust [This message has been edited by RosePetal (01-06-2002 06:57 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I dont know what the challenge is but this is a beautiful poem. floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (kiss on lips) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo lovely, sweet friend, I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!! (smiles) I will always love you, sweet friend, you mean the heavens to me! (kiss on lips) I love you, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I don't know what the challenge is but I do know this poem is very beautiful and filled with passion. *grin* that makes it great in my eyes. Very well done. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
From what I have gathered - challenge well met. Trust is an important key for an everlasting love. Good job. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Thanks Melton [This message has been edited by 2dalimit (01-07-2002 06:11 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rose Petals, Challenge well met. Marsha is going to love these words and what you did with them. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
yo baby girl, this was an awesome poem, im not sure which challenge this is either but the lyrics you came with were correct and were definately awesome... 1love, GhostWriter_6 A.k.A. Gw6 |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
i had to reply to this one again.. it just did somethign to me reading this.. i love this poem.... good work baby girl |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is great. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Ooohhh!! This is juz so romantic!! I thought of a love poem when I read Marsha's challenge, but then I couldn't think of anything. Yours is such a beautiful usage of the 2 lines. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Oh Joanna this is so beautiful. The use of these lines were excellent. I loved each and every word in this. Just simply a great poem! From your friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
RP~ ITS WONDERFUL.....and so tender...*sigh* great job... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Challenge - don't know about it, but challenge or not...this one will stand tall. jwesley |
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