Muse and I (serenity's magnetic challenge)

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2002-01-06 04:00 PM

I investigate
psychedelic
silhouettes
in which
symbols
creat balance
of metaphor...
for a music
made aesthetic
by
Live angel
rhythm

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-01-06 04:04 PM

Nice, nice, I caught this visual of angels dancing as you write! Very apt description of when the muse is upon you. (I need to quit trying to punch my muse out, heh heh.)

This stuff works for me! applause.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-01-06 04:24 PM

Ah Kethry, how delighted I am to see that our minds were in sync...hugs to you....

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-06 09:30 PM

(smiles) Oooooooohhhhh...I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!! (big huggssssss) The rhythm of angels, psychedelic silhouetees, I love it! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Kethry, your words always amaze me and color these pages with beauty! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2002-01-06 09:34 PM

WOW!!!This is great...I am really enjoying reading all these. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2002-01-06 09:41 PM

like the imagery..psychedelic silhouettes..gives this a very nice airy feel...

maybe I'm a little hard-headed tonight but fill though that the poem could continue as the metaphor for that music is elaborated on?

..just a thought.

Mac Attack
Member

since 2001-12-12

Posts 100
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2002-01-06 09:42 PM

Feels like a flowing dance. Nice.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-01-06 10:43 PM

live angel rhythm???

I wonder what that sounds like. . . hmmmmmm. . . could spawn another poem here Keth. . .

excellent. . .

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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-01-07 04:30 AM

Kethry - you do write well, and this one is suburb...

BC

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

9 posted 2002-01-07 06:30 AM

Kethry,beautiful dance like poem.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

10 posted 2002-01-08 02:33 AM

Oh yes, indeed, the muse is upon u.. always..

Wonderful write.. sensational read

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2002-01-09 04:24 AM

Kethry-
   This is great...very cool write.
   I may have to go play with this challenge too.
   Magnetic poetry can be sooooooo much fun!
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (01-09-2002 04:25 AM).]

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

12 posted 2002-01-09 11:46 PM

Keth - Your muse is definitely music to my ears. Nice write.

Dave

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