Art ( serenity's magnetic poetry challenge)

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Open Poetry #18

Art ( serenity's magnetic poetry challenge)

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

0 posted 2002-01-06 01:38 PM

Art

Old drunks
   free purple beer
raw psychedelic scuplture
  ate passions fashion

performing models
  balance empty latex
more wasted film

you can see
   hard black angel sex
canvassed in silhouette

and investigate the nude metaphor
  of her angry masterpiece
made absurdly aesthetic

experiment
   come
     imagine
        art

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-01-06 01:42 PM

Jamie, I am loving this!!! Perhaps I have carnival on the brain but the opening lines of this reminded me of snapshots of Mardi Gras... (isn't this fun?)

Enjoyed it much, me friend!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-06 01:44 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo inventive and marvelous, I love the silhouettes your pen paints. (big hugggsssss) With the beauty of poetry we can always criticize art and create art of our own! I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jamie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-01-06 03:29 PM

silhouettes in shadow,
loved what you did with the thought fragments.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-01-06 04:44 PM

Serenity will get absolutely NO work done if we keep this up...

and you did an excellent job!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2002-01-06 05:28 PM

*grin* I am more into works of art done with natures paintbrush...This one had me seeing all kinds of different things.

A great write for the challenge. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-01-06 10:51 PM

hmmmmmmm. . . I see that most of these magnetic poetry poems are talking about art. . .

perhaps we've all been to the same museum???

well done Jamie. . . I like it. . .

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