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Krawdad
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0 posted 2002-01-06 11:33 AM


Old Screaming  (magnetic)



Why write from old screaming?


Imagine his experiment

how electric blue like music

and free passion

then

as empty as silhouette

he paints pictures of smoke

in black and white



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strbbux
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1 posted 2002-01-06 11:35 AM


Short and to the point and a wonderful write. floria
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2 posted 2002-01-06 01:45 PM


Old screaming...love the title, e! that's exactly why I wanted to do something different, everything I wrote felt like echoes of old screaming (not that I want anything NEW to scream about--serenity talks to the ceiling, pointedly)

What I like about this is sort of frees up the brain into fragments of vision...challenge, well met!

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3 posted 2002-01-06 01:50 PM




BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! Passion shines through these words like electricity, sweet friend, you always write so wonderfully! I need to give this challenge a try too! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
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4 posted 2002-01-06 03:26 PM


Lightening write
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



1slick_lady
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5 posted 2002-01-06 03:58 PM


from a mind
that never sleeps
a heart that never
skips a beat
the ink is not dry
it runs so deep
color in a brush
so sweet

helen

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6 posted 2002-01-06 04:30 PM



Ah ha! Challenge well met!

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