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desperado
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0 posted 2002-01-06 09:52 AM



tonight is a night for love
as the wind caresses your silken skin
tonight is a night for love
as the moon broadcasts your glow within
your smile that shines like a sun in the sky
your fingers that touch me like fire and ice
your eyes that twinkle like stars just for me
your kiss that throws me eternally
into a whirlwind of passion and peace
into a journey I've been once before
through old memories that now will fade away
behind me and locked forever through a door
as the music begins on the electronic world
raving and dancing and no hidden desires
just a desire for fun and passion remains
as we dance among the burning fires
into a world of freedom and peace
with love to guide us from cloud to cloud
and laughter to light the way
and keep away realities shroud

free your mind and the raver will emerge from inside
a raver never dies but dances eternal in stary skies
just free your mind, and find salvation in your soul
this is a revelation, that will make your life whole

People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard

© Copyright 2002 James Webster - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-01-06 10:01 AM



I have missed your writings...good to see you, Sir...welcome home!

heather_kitn
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2 posted 2002-01-06 10:10 AM


Heya Des!  *smiles*  beautifully spoken as always!  But then again, I ahve always been a fan of your words!

-heather

I do not seek...I find!
           ~Picasso~

peppermint35
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3 posted 2002-01-06 10:25 AM


I really enjoyed the whole picture you painted here.. especially the last stanza..

Hope... faith and love.. all three here

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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4 posted 2002-01-06 02:09 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, it's so great to see youa agin, sweet friend, we've all missed you and your beautiful words so much! (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is a beautiful declaration of true love! May you forever share happiness with your love, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

doreen peri
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5 posted 2002-01-06 02:35 PM


you da

Love Raver!



desperahhhhhhhdo!!!!


desperado
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6 posted 2002-01-06 05:28 PM


thanks every one it's good to be writting some thing good for once.  the stuff I haven't been posting is kinda bad.  hehe it's been difficult to find something worth writing about.  but hey maybe I found something.  hehe

People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-01-06 05:39 PM


Enjoyed...James
rosepetals25
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8 posted 2002-01-06 05:45 PM


desperado,

   I don't think I have seen your poems before.. but I enjoyed this. I hope to see more.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Startime
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9 posted 2002-01-06 05:50 PM


Well you have picked the perfect topic...A nighf for love can always get the muse in us glowing with pleasure. This poem is absolutely wonderful. I love the read. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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10 posted 2002-01-06 06:43 PM


Desperado,

Havent seen you on here in a while! This is an awesome poem, I wish a guy would write something like this for me. (Hugs)

RP

Irish Rose
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11 posted 2002-01-06 08:40 PM


sigh.............

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

desperado
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12 posted 2002-01-07 12:52 PM


wow there are a few of you I haven't heard from in ages here.  it's certainly been a while.  hopefully this has gotten YOUR muse going as well.  let me know.

People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard

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