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Dusty Rhodes
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since 2001-10-14
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0 posted 2002-01-06 03:08 AM


Here we are in the hereafter time
Where we hold close in our being
I try to give my thoughts to rhyme
To let you feel the me, without seeing

Letting the words wash over and around
As a cascade of flow to make them pure
With the feel of a waterfall falling down
Erasing all doubts and making you sure

Read my words with the touch of braille
Fingertips lightly touching with the drift of feel
As we ride the boat of destiny under full sail
Where all things can happen, and all be real

Let these thoughts swirl to our way
We will soar to the skies in a magic of time
For in your smile, I see you heard my say
With our clasp of hands, we become sublime

[This message has been edited by Dusty Rhodes (01-06-2002 04:02 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-01-06 08:38 AM



Another Traveler, I see...well done, Dusty...

This likes me...

Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
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2 posted 2002-01-06 03:08 PM



This is a very touching write,
Dusty.  Thanks for sharing with
all of us.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-01-06 03:18 PM


Mmmm Dusty, this just picked me up and carried me along sooooo smoothly, then set me down oh so gently at the end....love it.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Startime
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4 posted 2002-01-06 06:20 PM


*sigh* you put so many of the things I love in this poem that I was transported magically into your words. *sigh* I love it and I love the way it made me feel. Well done. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-01-06 09:00 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo lovely, sweet friend, may you forever ride destiny with the love of your life on eternity's stream into Eden! (big hugggsssss) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dusty, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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6 posted 2002-01-06 09:08 PM


" We will soar to the skies" nice write, floria
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