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Mac Attack
Member

since 2001-12-12

Posts 100
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-01-05 08:46 PM

When I work,
I earn.
When I play,
I laugh.
When I write,
I think.
When I talk,
I speak.
When I’m alone
I cry.
When I’m with you
I love.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2002-01-05 09:23 PM

if I go by this... the sum of me is seemingly
more complicated

just kiddin..you have a neat way of getting to the nitty gritty here

Happy New Year by the way, enjoy the love part and thanks again for that tip you gave me on my posting at Moontown.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-05-2002 09:24 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-05 09:28 PM

(smiles) Sooooooo cute, sweet Margaret, may you forever find true happiness with him and love forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margaret, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2002-01-05 09:29 PM

Now that sums you up just perfectly to my way of thinking....I really like this poem.

**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mac Attack
Member

since 2001-12-12

Posts 100
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2002-01-05 10:02 PM

Thanks for the warm words of encouragement.  Sometimes they simply come out simple.  Glad you all liked it.

(ecrivan, I'm pleased my humble suggestions on Moontown were able to help you out.  I too love a good constructive critique!)

Happy New Year to you all!  Hope it's a good one!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-01-05 10:54 PM

I love the simplicity of this. Very beautiful. Welcome to Passions.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2002-01-05 11:10 PM

Mac darling boy this is simply wonderful

I love this I truly do, You fit in so well here. Utterly first class writing

I can't tell you why this works so well all i can say is it does. I wish I could do one half so well.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Mac Attack
Member

since 2001-12-12

Posts 100
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2002-01-06 10:43 AM

Thanks for the welcome, I appreciate it.

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

8 posted 2002-01-06 12:49 PM

Hey Mac, decide to come over here like some of us MT'rs did. I used to post under Dledge95 over there. Anyway, I liked the poem, and it is good to see you here.

Dave

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