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Thoughts Of Seasons |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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THOUGHTS OF“SEASONS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ It was spring when we met, happiness reigned in our lives, and then summer came when we knew each other close… It was fall when we parted, tears flowed in broken hearts, and then winter came, and mine still flows with the memories of you… ~~~~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
with me it is the opposite of the seasons you've written of.....this is so sad. Kathleen-- |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
BC...this is a touching write...you have used the seasons well... May your spring and summer return... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sad sigh) This is so so sad, sweet friend, I hope this isn't really based on a lost love experience of yours, for you deserve true happiness for every season! (big hugggsssss) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may every season bring you great promises of joy! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, I have to agree.. this is sad  but very much enjoyed.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, Winter may bring her discontent but with the spring new love is sent soon that giddy burst of new love will lift you to the stars above then will winter's tears ever be only a faded memory. Loved what you did withthe season of sorrow Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You write the memory of your love in such a wonderfully tender way. I love to read your words for they talk of love from within your soul. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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heather_kitn Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 61In The Kokapelli's Song |
I think we remember each and every "love" somewhere in our hearts. The sweet ones and the bitter...the friends and the lovers. -heather |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very touching and sad, BC. Then again, the dark cold of winter and a lost love will do that to you. Here's hoping you get warm soon. All writing comes |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy truly the way you write of love and the seasons fits so well. I hope Spring springs into action soon, and that summer follows post haste Utterly utterly wonderful, poetry doesn't get much better than this. And if it did you'd have written it.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
why is it always winter when love leaves??? I'll never figure that out. . . well done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and then winter (wynter) came, as always *s |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bill,I loved this even though it was sad.Wonderful job!    Juanita |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
awwww...winter can be such a sad season....nicely done Bill....  Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
This is so depressing Bill, we go through things like this many times throughout our lives. I have experienced losses like this, but we must move on, for usually there are bigger and better things we will have that will make us happy. Great write, short and sweet the way I like them! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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