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0 posted 2002-01-05 11:34 AM


whispers, giggles, sighs
the nature of man in song
laughter in the night

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-05 11:40 AM




Oooooooohhhhh...this is a senryu, and what a lovely senryu it is, it too gave me the giggles! (smiles) Yep, when they get off of work and enjoy the night, it can be such a treat indeed! (giggles) I love it, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-05 11:48 AM


adorable Virginia...yes a senyru, although you did mention nature..i would still say a senyru..loved it.. hugs

                    ~Victoria

                

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


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3 posted 2002-01-05 01:45 PM


VERY IMPRESSIVE!!!! This is definitely senryu because it deals with the human emotions rather than emotions through nature.  REALLY ENJOYED THIS!!!  ***Ivy Rose
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