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vandana
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0 posted 2002-01-05 11:30 AM



If you would be mine,
I will take you
In my heart,
I will make you mine,
and make you happy forever,
If you would come
Into my life,
I will give my whole life to you,
If ,
One day,
you decides to break my heart,
I will remember you a lot,
If you leave me,
But If this day will come,
I will pray that
this day won't come,
If this would happened
to one of us,
pray every night
and held you tight,
Won't let you go,
If you would be mine,
I will be glad
to have you,
I won't be sad,
like I used to be,
If you promise
to be mine forever,
I will be fine
and take you with me,
I will give you my heart
and soul
If this would happened to us,
I will make you happy forever,
If this would happened to us,
If this would.....
If......

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-01-05 11:34 AM




YAY!!! And it will as long as you believe in yourself! (kiss on cheek) Always believe in "wills" and forget the "ifs", for true happiness is always around to forever bring love to your golden heart you deserve so much! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Gaia
2 posted 2002-01-05 01:05 PM


Enjoyable, tender read, vandana. I hope all is well at home for you, and that your neighbors and you may find peaceful solutions.

May the ripple of LOVE
become the wave of PEACE

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-01-05 01:11 PM


vandana I hope that if becomes a reality full of happiness and fulfillment...James
Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2002-01-05 11:00 PM


I think you know what to do if you get the chance.  I hope you do.  Nicely done.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Duncan
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5 posted 2002-01-05 11:19 PM


I really like this and I hope that the best of it comes true for you.
Sven
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6 posted 2002-01-05 11:31 PM


if you keep writing like this. . . I'll run out of words. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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