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craigrk
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since 2001-12-23
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0 posted 2002-01-05 02:31 AM




Polo and Marcy
announce their engagement –
Edwardo demonstrates his backhand –
Bishop Sheen glares
smilingly over his mint iced tea –
and as the olive turns
in my stomach
I spill martini
on my new flannel pants
and Molly becomes concerned.
Closing her Chippendale eyes
she wraps her Andalusian tongue
around the stain
and I remember why
it was I had agreed to come.


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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-01-05 02:50 AM


craig,
you write these vignettes so well.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



C?
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2 posted 2002-01-10 02:58 PM


I can't believe this only got one reply!! this is wicked writing,
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-01-10 03:06 PM


Very interesting indeed!
Well writ and craftily so

Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
4 posted 2002-01-10 04:19 PM


brilliant!
i actually yelled "no" when ya spilled the drink....
but i see it was for a greater good.
an excellent portrait!

*simplify*

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-01-10 04:23 PM


OH!!  This is too much!  Fantastic write!!
I love this and you got the biggest, warmest smiles from this frozen Canadian today!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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