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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-01-04 10:47 PM


Baby Max at his kicking phase,
frolics in his bath, Mom is amazed...
life in shades, unclear images at best
recognizing her odour and familiar breast.

Baby Max all washed and cleaned
decked out for a photo, boosting his esteem;
eyeing what's all around and flexing tiny legs
on a diet of breast milk pumped into little kegs.

Baby Max on a couch in the comfort of a home
pondering the luck he has, not being alone?
months will pass, baby's cries will taper down
on his way to becoming a somebody, Max renowned!



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-04-2002 10:49 PM).]

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peppermint35
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1 posted 2002-01-04 10:52 PM


A charming, enchanting write!!

Loved this read

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-01-04 11:09 PM


Oh this little guy, my grandnephew is now the focus of attention, likes his bath and is waited on hand and foot!Has it made.Think I'll right a poem at each stage of his growth.


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