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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-01-04 10:14 PM


For A Thousand Moments
~*~
Heavens velvet night trembles
as bright stars tarry above the veil
awaiting the sound of music to slit the sky
naked moonbeams streak the night
more than candlelight they delight
butterflies crush the trail of tears
scattering stars in magical light
for a thousand moments
I cherish this sight
and dance among the stars
to the hush of butterfly wings
and magical moonbeams

BloomingRose


© Copyright 2002 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
Jamie
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1 posted 2002-01-04 10:20 PM


lovely poem--enjoyed reading

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
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2 posted 2002-01-04 10:35 PM


Lovely and lyrical Debra.  Enjoyed, hugs, Nancy

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

strbbux
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3 posted 2002-01-04 10:37 PM


"Dance among the stars" simply beautiful. floria
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4 posted 2002-01-04 10:38 PM


Great visions...such a visual and mystical
poem...Thank You..

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5 posted 2002-01-04 11:14 PM




(sigh) So majestic and lovely, sweet friend,
may your loving hearts always soar through moonbeams and flitter with the butterflies and fantasys joys! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true masterpiece! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

BloomingRose
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6 posted 2002-01-05 09:20 AM


Jamie~ Thank you much, glad you enjoyed.

Nancy~ *hugs* Thanks.

Floria~ Thank you dear lady.

Magnus~ So glad you enjoyed

Noah~ Sweet Noah... *hugs*

hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 2002-01-05 10:23 AM


how wonderful to see your growth as a poet and also to see your beautiful happy face
Irish Rose
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8 posted 2002-01-05 10:26 AM


You have inspired me, Deb, this is outstanding!

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

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