navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #18 » Losing You (rictameter)
Open Poetry #18
Post A Reply Post New Topic Losing You (rictameter) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
rosepetals25
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Elite
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076
PA

0 posted 2002-01-04 10:03 PM


Losing You

This fear
Here in my heart
Is more than I can take
The very thought of losing you
Is one I can’t accept
I need you here
Always

My heart
Full of unknown
Grows so cold with this fright
That you could be taken from me
Without saying good bye
Without a hug
Embrace

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

© Copyright 2002 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
peppermint35
Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
1 posted 2002-01-04 10:07 PM


Fear can be a powerful, crippling thing... I can't imagine you losing anyone you love.. your loving heart speaks out with each and every phrase.

Hugs,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

RosePetal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985
South Florida
2 posted 2002-01-04 10:09 PM


Aww tara, don't worry too much, or else you'll have a nervous break down my dear!
Everything will be just fine, you'll see. No worries sweetie! (hugs)

Joanna

rosepetals25
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Elite
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076
PA
3 posted 2002-01-04 10:27 PM


peppermint35 - I don't know enough details about the situation yet.  This was my first gut reaction to finding out health information about a very close friend. Hopefully I won't lose him.

Joanna - If I had a penny everytime someone said that to me.. I'd be a millionare *chuckles* I hope everything will be fine.. I have no idea what I'd do without this person.  Thank you. *hugs*

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

strbbux
Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-01-04 10:46 PM


Oh I love this rose petals, I am learning about all these wonderful styles. floria
Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
5 posted 2002-01-04 11:21 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Tara, this is so so sad, but I know deep down with all my heart as long as you love yourself and believe in yourself, his love will always be with you and you will meet and be filled with happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) Fear not, sweet friend, love will always find a way! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

rosepetals25
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Elite
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076
PA
6 posted 2002-01-04 11:26 PM


floria - I'm glad you liked I learned so much here.. I'm honored to be able to show you new forms

Noah - This has nothing to do with Dave.. we are fine I assure you. Thank you for reading.


Ivy Rose
Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA
7 posted 2002-01-04 11:49 PM


Perfect Love casts out fear. I loved the way you expressed not only your fear ; but your perfect love.

***Ivy Rose

Rogue24
Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111
Ontario, Canada
8 posted 2002-01-05 06:07 AM


Tara HUGS YOU SO TIGHT! I dont know what to say, your words, they make me feel so loved. I am sorry you had to hear about these health problems the way you did. I promise you I am here for a VERY LONG TIME. I wont leave you, even after this world we will still be together. You will always have a piece of my heart. I love you always and forever! Yours, Always, Ter. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOX

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
9 posted 2002-01-05 06:50 AM


Tara,
so sad and it's even worse when you can't do anything about it.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #18 » Losing You (rictameter)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary