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walker
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Florida

0 posted 2002-01-04 09:20 PM



To exist
in a moment of bliss
where passion brings
fantasies turn reality
captivated within
I want to be
To kiss
your lips and
taste you deep
and dream of your love
like this
I want to be
To provoke
an explosive sensual
fusion
of two bodies
you and me
forever loving
I want to be
To live in you
and you in me
in paradise
where love
exploits itself
with a single glance
of seduction
recklessly
I want to be


© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
HiddenSparklez
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1 posted 2002-01-04 09:25 PM


Two words pretty much sums it up: OH MYYY!!!
LOL (Sorry I had to just put that in - it's kinda my trade mark now) Beautifully written!

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

peppermint35
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2 posted 2002-01-04 09:25 PM


Me too, me too!!!

Wonderfully seductive!!!!

Pepper
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   Percy Bysshe Shelley

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-01-04 09:34 PM


Oh Yes!  Very senuous write.  Enjoyed!  ~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Ariana
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4 posted 2002-01-04 09:41 PM


Walker - Very sensual.  I could feel all of what you were trying to relate.  Enjoyed.
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5 posted 2002-01-04 11:10 PM




(smiles) Mmmmmmmmmm...seductive, I love it!!! (sigh) May you be all you want to be forever and may true love fill your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words are always so romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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6 posted 2002-01-05 12:20 PM


*sigh* sensually amazing....this is what I want too...you have put it in words that have passion flowing in them and sensuality gracefully filling each word. BRAVO!!! I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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7 posted 2002-01-05 04:13 PM


You have pretty much put all of your romantic
poetic cards on the table...Something tells
me you will have a royal flush...

rosepetals25
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8 posted 2002-01-05 04:54 PM


Walker,

    How romantic this is   I love it!

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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9 posted 2002-01-05 05:10 PM


enjoyed
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10 posted 2002-01-05 08:33 PM


walker,

Don't we all? LOL!  Wonderfully tender and sensual write...just loved it!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

Irish Rose
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11 posted 2002-01-05 09:06 PM


I used to think I wanted this but somedays, I'm just not sure.....

but it is a beautiful write

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

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