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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-01-04 04:40 PM

The flow of your curves beneath soft sheets.
Fragrance of softest hair, a road to lips.
Delectable earlobes awaiting a kiss, a nip.
My passions build as I gaze upon beauty.

Awaken my dear, for this stallion waits.
Your ride will carry us to distant stars.
My reins tighten as your saddle awaits.
My veins carry blood aflame with desire.

Steadily I will take you to our moment.
The fire burning will course through.
You and I will climb to the highest.
For I, your love...do bite at my bit.

Listen to your sighs, hear a soft moan.
Let joy and ecstacy overwhelm as one.
The breeze of love will feed the desire.
For you, only you...ride passion's fire.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-04 05:22 PM

no amount of critique in the world could improve on what I just read.
This is so beautiful, so loving and so real. It really got to me....

My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-01-04 05:24 PM

Whewww...thanx Kay...I am pleased that you
found this a good one...

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-01-04 05:27 PM

well, it left me in tears if that tells you anything....it's a lovely poem of passion and devotion, it's just beautiful.

My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-01-04 05:30 PM

Kay...one of the things a poet always enjoys
(and you know this)...is the satisfaction of
knowing that what they have written has
impacted on the reader... Being the case...
It gave me great pleasure, needless to say..

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-01-04 05:42 PM

Magnus - well done, and sensually written. A good one it is...

BC

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-01-04 05:45 PM

Thanx BC...and now I must go post a comment
to that nice one you put up here for us to
all enjoy.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2002-01-04 05:54 PM

Oh Barry, I really like this. The sensual mood flows like a dream in every line.

RP

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-01-04 05:56 PM

Joanna, and I had fun putting it on the page.
For I could see it and made each line that
much more fun to write...

Thank You...

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

9 posted 2002-01-04 06:09 PM

You know, I love this!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-01-04 06:11 PM

Walker...and You Know...I am pleased...

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

11 posted 2002-01-04 07:08 PM

can't write? me not write? hah! You inspired me! Thank you

My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2002-01-04 08:32 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever ride to eternity with true loves bliss in your heart! (big hugggsssssss) Your serenades always sing across these pages, sweet friend, soooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

13 posted 2002-01-05 12:06 PM

*sigh* oh my gosh this one is sizzling right off the page. Me thinks you have been into the oysters and will Lou ever be a lucky woman tonight. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

14 posted 2002-01-05 12:31 PM

Magnus,
What kind of hormones are you taking? Good grief...I want some of those!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

15 posted 2002-01-05 01:01 AM

Sizzle... sizzle... sizzle...
Now that's a really sensual ride!
You are really riding high on passionate Love, magnus.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

16 posted 2002-01-05 06:29 AM

Ride em cowboy...or should that be Hi-o Silver.
Magic write.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

17 posted 2002-01-05 07:14 PM

*bump*

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2002-01-05 08:01 PM

Noah, my young friend...thank you yet again.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

19 posted 2002-01-05 08:02 PM

Karen....Burp!!!...Excuse me...YEPPER...
one gross of oysters down the hatch...with
a little bit of sauce and a beverage of
choice (not saying what) Hint: no alcohol..

Thanx..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

20 posted 2002-01-05 08:03 PM

Larry C....Shhhhhh!!!

It is a secret...I can't say...You have
to be a member of the over the hill club
to get some. Do you qualify???

Thanx..

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