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Victoria
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0 posted 2002-01-04 03:33 PM



The sky is a corn flower blue
was once a turbulent storm
but time lasso’s a new day
with a sienna smile
upon the lips of the morn

Yellows roses prominade
in their skirts of lemonade
as bees in yellow jackets dosie do

The sun comes over the mountain
just a dancin in the fountains
skipping like a child in the rain
in a bluejean sky
the morning taste's of apple pie
as winds strut along like John Wayne.


"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            

[This message has been edited by Victoria (01-04-2002 07:42 PM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-01-04 03:34 PM


Saddle up cowboy.  This is delightful Vic. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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2 posted 2002-01-04 05:37 PM


Victoria...I can feel the energy and
fun in this poem...Like what you have
done here..

Victoria
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3 posted 2002-01-04 07:54 PM


Thank you Donna and Magnus..I had fun writing it..thanks for peeking in

                ~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


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